Does my squeeze page scare you?

by SPress
5 replies
Hi Folks,

I have a squeeze page up which is having moderate success at converting. So...just a couple of questions if you wouldn't mind checking it out.

1. Is it informative enough?

2. If you hit refresh, you'll see a second headline...do you have a preference between the two?

(both headlines were hijacked from my sales letter which was written by a fellow Warrior who is held in high regard).

Many thanks in advance for checking it out!

Cheers,

Steve

PS - OH...the link is in my sig below
#page #scare #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author Bo Mill
    It's nicely designed but it is not as informative as I'd want it to be. For example, my squeeze page contains list of keywords, list of websites where the product could be promoted, how to sign up for clickbank, etc. Even though most of the people never use those, it is important to have it, because you then show the affiliates that you actually care about them and your product.
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  • Profile picture of the author Chris Stigson
    It may be well desgined, but opt-in pages should rarely have that much graphics. Try making it just WHITE with a video and some red arrows to an opt-in form, and also the headline is WAAAAY to confusing for somebody who wants what you have I think...

    Like, if I don't know what all that stuff is, I'd be like, wooow, hang on a minute, that's a buttload of scary words... I will need to "learn something", even if there's no code involved.

    There's no "real benefit" in it.

    Try something like:

    "Discover My 1-Click Turnkey Website Builder That Spits Out Ready Made Websites, Ready To Pull In Profits In 24 Hours or Less... No Code or Previous Experience Required!"

    That's what I interpreted it to be, at least.
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    • Profile picture of the author Scott Ames
      I like this headline best:

      "Breakthrough Software Gives You The Power To Point & Click Your Way To An Attractive Web Site In Mere Minutes"

      but... I don't like the font its using.


      My first impression: This promises simple and uncomplicated web site creation, but the page I'm seeing is complicated. I would prefer to see the added videos after I opt-in. I don't know where to click first.
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      • Profile picture of the author JohnMcCabe
        Originally Posted by Scott Ames View Post

        I like this headline best:

        "Breakthrough Software Gives You The Power To Point & Click Your Way To An Attractive Web Site In Mere Minutes"

        but... I don't like the font its using.


        My first impression: This promises simple and uncomplicated web site creation, but the page I'm seeing is complicated. I would prefer to see the added videos after I opt-in. I don't know where to click first.
        What he said...

        Way too many videos for a squeeze page. The opt-in form actually gets kind of lost with all the graphics.

        Scare me? No. Make me want to opt in and check it out? Sorry, no again...
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        • Profile picture of the author SPress
          Thanks everyone for the replies.

          It's about what I thought of it...even though I designed it. Always best to get a fresh set of eyes on it.

          I think I'll create a page to test against which uses the shorter headline and only the single, main video.

          Cheers!

          Steve
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