Dear Warrior Person: Please look at AbMyths.com (squeeze page) and give unrestrained comment ..

saleswriter101 · 09-26-2009, 05:25 PM

Your comments go very far in helping to create a better page ..

:: AbMyths.com : Secrets of "The Truth About Six-Pack Abs" : Easiest Way to Defined Muscle, Oodles of Energy & Vibrant Health

It's been reworked a lot in past couple of weeks and I actually have about a dozen subscribers.

All comments appreciated. What doesn't work? How could it work better?

Thank you so much!
Scott

davidomni · 09-26-2009, 05:51 PM

The page looks all right, I would try to get a more specific customer avatar though...
Improve your copy a little bit. Honestly too, this is a pretty competitive niche.

I would suggest getting your keywords together and see what comes up in the serp`s
gauge it, and see if you can beat your competition. You will need some good traffic for this,
I would hit up health forums... Again based around your keywords. Blogs, craigslist, backpage, kigi, and make article`s too. For that I would outsource...

If you are going to do ppc, use msn. The users on MSN will buy more compared to the users on google and yahoo.

Anyways, a little of topic but I hope this helps!

Cheers.

futuremills · 09-26-2009, 05:56 PM

looking good....where do you get picture like that from?

Terro · 09-26-2009, 06:00 PM

I didn´t like the way you have to put your e-mail in twice. I was a bit curious when I started reading, since I´ve been in the fitness industry for about ten years as an personal-trainer, but the two optin boxe were a litlebit off-putting. Might wanna get more focused photos too.

Well that´s my thought anyway.

Troy_Phillips · 09-26-2009, 06:14 PM

Admittedly I know nothing about the niche . If it was my splash page their is no way I would mention exercise on it .

We all know that exercise is the only answer but this is something the customer needs to know after they have signed up to your list .

Exercise and secret just don't seem to go together on this one . The third secret is a keeper.

As I said ... not my niche .

Someone who could use some ab work :-)

acrasial · 09-26-2009, 06:16 PM

go on clickbank, find the products in your niche, look at their pages... check and see how yours compares.

Personally, I am not bought with your page... people want INFO. and some pizzaz... it doesn't quite cut it for me.

09-26-2009, 05:25 PM	#1
saleswriter101 Active Warrior Join Date: May 2008 Location: , , Canada. Posts: 30 Thanks: 24 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Dear Warrior Person: Please look at AbMyths.com (squeeze page) and give unrestrained comment .. Your comments go very far in helping to create a better page .. :: AbMyths.com : Secrets of "The Truth About Six-Pack Abs" : Easiest Way to Defined Muscle, Oodles of Energy & Vibrant Health It's been reworked a lot in past couple of weeks and I actually have about a dozen subscribers. All comments appreciated. What doesn't work? How could it work better? Thank you so much! Scott

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davidomni Banned Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 193 Thanks: 1 Thanked 21 Times in 16 Posts	Re: Dear Warrior Person: Please look at AbMyths.com (squeeze page) and give unrestrained comment .. The page looks all right, I would try to get a more specific customer avatar though... Improve your copy a little bit. Honestly too, this is a pretty competitive niche. I would suggest getting your keywords together and see what comes up in the serp`s gauge it, and see if you can beat your competition. You will need some good traffic for this, I would hit up health forums... Again based around your keywords. Blogs, craigslist, backpage, kigi, and make article`s too. For that I would outsource... If you are going to do ppc, use msn. The users on MSN will buy more compared to the users on google and yahoo. Anyways, a little of topic but I hope this helps! Cheers.

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acrasial I Know You Want Me Banned War Room Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 385 Thanks: 105 Thanked 79 Times in 44 Posts Contact Info	Re: Dear Warrior Person: Please look at AbMyths.com (squeeze page) and give unrestrained comment .. go on clickbank, find the products in your niche, look at their pages... check and see how yours compares. Personally, I am not bought with your page... people want INFO. and some pizzaz... it doesn't quite cut it for me.