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10-03-2009, 07:33 AM
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Smithy
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Help cant think of my header text
Just created a new product called Auction training kit which contains ebay tutorial videos, packing slips, ebay business cards, ebay listing templates and much more . The problem i got is i cant think of a good header text for my site. This is what i came up with so far.
Auction Training Kit and – Secret Weapon from the Desk of Experienced eBay Seller – Golden Opportunity to start your eBay Venture Right Now As you can see its not very good. If you guys can think of any that would be great |
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10-03-2009, 07:36 AM
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Re: Help cant think of my header text
how about...
"Successful eBay Seller Finally Reveals ALL - Get his Complete Secret Weapon Kit" or something like that just a suggestion. Sometimes headlines require redoing over 100 times :-) |
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10-03-2009, 07:44 AM
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Smithy
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Re: Help cant think of my header text
Sounds good thanks
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10-03-2009, 08:37 AM
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Re: Help cant think of my header text
I used a software tool to come out with the following headline ideas, for your perusal:
It's A Shame For You Not To Start Your eBay Venture Right Now--When These People Do It So Easily Look Inside To Discover How To Start Your eBay Venture Right Now Yes. You Can Start Your eBay Venture Right Now With Our System ... It's So Easy A Child Could Do it! You Might Be Thinking It's Really Hard To Start Your eBay Venture Right Now... Well Think Again! You Can Start Your eBay Venture Right Now Right Now If You're Confused About Buying a/an Auction Training Kit, Here's Some Help How To Start Your eBay Venture Right Now Quickly & Easily--100% Guaranteed! How To Start Your eBay Venture Right Now Quickly & Easily--Satisfaction Guaranteed! How To Start Your eBay Venture Right Now--100% Guaranteed! Thousands Now Start Your eBay Venture Right Now Who Never Thought They Could The Shocking Truth About How To Start Your eBay Venture Right Now! A Fresh Approach In How To Start Your eBay Venture Right Now... Just What You Have Been Looking For! A Once In A Lifetime Opportunity... Learn How To Start Your eBay Venture Right Now--From An Expert! A Rare Opportunity To Learn From An Expert--How To Start Your eBay Venture Right Now Quickly And Easily The Most Highly Acclaimed Information On How To Start Your eBay Venture Right Now Ever Assembled! Major Breakthrough in Auction Training Kit The Revolutionary Auction Training Kit The Complete Guide to Start Your eBay Venture Right Now! The Quick And Easy Way To Start Your eBay Venture Right Now! Think You Can't Start Your eBay Venture Right Now? You're In For A Pleasant Surprise! Want To Start Your eBay Venture Right Now? We Got You Covered! Why These Auction Training Kit Are Called "Complete"? Who Else Used to Say Starting Your eBay Venture Right Now Was Hard? The Secrets of Starting Your eBay Venture Right Now! The Success Secrets of a Successful eBay Seller Discover The Secrets of Starting Your eBay Venture Right Now How Would You Like To Start Your eBay Venture Right Now? |
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10-03-2009, 09:14 AM
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Smithy
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Re: Help cant think of my header text
Thanks for that
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