Would love some feedback on my first ever product launch squeeze page

AdamLCasey · 10-07-2009, 05:48 PM

Hi Warrior,

Please check out my first ever squeeze page and let me know what you think. There is a free ebook in it for you and even more goodies when I launch on Tuesday 13th October.
www.infoproductstheme.com

Cheers

Adam
p.s. if your interested in beta testing for me PM me. SPECIFICALLY IF YOUR A PRO INFO PRODUCT MARKETER

Wham · 10-07-2009, 05:51 PM

link does not work

Istvan Horvath · 10-07-2009, 05:58 PM

The link works for me... although I don't see why is it redirected via budurl.

It looks good, the video is short (which is great!) and concise.
For my conservative taste - a little bit too colourful.

I guess it has been done with the same product that you are going to sell (I can see in the source that it is a WP powered site). Would be interesting to test it.
PM sent.

Wham · 10-07-2009, 05:59 PM

yeah it works now

looks great

patJ · 10-07-2009, 06:01 PM

Optin should always be above the fold. Replace the book with the optin fields.

RGallowitz · 10-07-2009, 06:02 PM

I love it. Has a different feel than most of the normal squeeze pages.
Kind of like a minisite effect.

Good work and good luck with your launch.

Regards,
Reinhardt

AdamLCasey · 10-07-2009, 06:05 PM

Thanks PatJ I'll definitely take a look at moving that above the fold.

Cheers for the feedback so far, sorry about the link issues. Should be sorted now.

Rebtl · 10-07-2009, 10:26 PM

I don't know how other people feel about this, but if it was me I would have the video play automatically when you load the page. I actually sat there for a second expecting to play on its own.

Just don't be one of those that hides the controls to the video so the visitor can't stop it. Thats a fast way to get me to leave your page.

Good looking page though

Rebtl

Will Edwards · 10-07-2009, 10:31 PM

Nice Twitter link thingie!

Good luck,

Will

AGSniper · 10-07-2009, 10:36 PM

It's very neatly organized and easy for the eye to read! Nice job on the landing page!

Rebtl · 10-07-2009, 10:38 PM

Also just noticed this,

Make it more obvious that the optin on the right is the same one that video is talking about.

The video says sign up and we will email you about the product launch.

Which is great, but the sidebar kind of feels like a different product and optin to me.

I would make the sidebar more obvious that it is for the WP theme.

i.e. "Sign-Up Now to be notified when the theme is available and get this free report instantly"

Also, if there is a way you could make the video player stay on the call to action screen at the very end instead of reverting back to the begining of the video that would be good too. So that the visitor is left staring at your call to action with an arrow pointing to your optin box.

mikeyman120 · 10-07-2009, 10:45 PM

Cool squeeze page. Maybe try the opt in box above the ebook, above the fold as mentioned. Cool video, voice might be better instead of having to read.

Mike

Regional Warrior · 10-07-2009, 11:37 PM

hey way cool , I like the design any chance you could PM me with the software you used for the video?

Cheers

cobra tatham · 10-07-2009, 11:50 PM

Get the opt box above fold as mentioned a few times. Also you might want to change "+email address" to "Primary Email address" because many people never even check their other email addresses. You may consider changing the "Get My Free Report" color to a solid orange. Really looks great though....

Andy

SPress · 10-08-2009, 12:30 AM

Put the "Get My Free Report" text along with the red arrows above the fold.

Otherwise, really sharp looking. Looks like the same layout as the recent Keyword Elite squeeze page.

AdamLCasey · 10-08-2009, 04:27 AM

@Rebtl and everyone else really. I've added a large play button to the video now. How does everyone else feel about auto playing videos. I sometimes feel them to be alittle annoying especially when the sounds booming out.

Thanks for all this feedback we are implementing some of the changes now. Especially the above fold one as many of you have mentioned this little/big faux pas.
Keep them coming peeps

Much Appreciated

AdamLCasey · 10-08-2009, 05:21 AM

Implemented that main optin change now. What do you all think?

Mike Hersh · 10-08-2009, 06:44 AM

Looks really cool right now.

To me it looks a neat product also. But that's after I watched the video 3 times and used the pause button a few times to stop every picture in the video with the details.

I think you should make the video a little bit more longer with the details of every one of the "modules" to stay more.

Not all the people are native english speakers/readers.

I wish you the best of luck with your product launch...

Mike G

EDIT:

Another thing I just noticed is that your ebook is not perfectly related to your product. Personally, I do need this kind of theme, but I were someone who came to your site and is not interested in your script offer, they may optin if you had a better offer.

In short, your offer for optin is not appealing enough... I think you should write a short ebook related to your "thing" or offer a free video with a tactic people can use instantly.

I believe that your optin rate will be a lot higher.

Mike G

EDIT: I'm mister edit today lol....

No seriously now... I just opted in to your early bird list and I think that you better add another twitter banner in it. Why would you spend a page that I have to close when I arrived to it, instead of asking for another call to action?

Squeeze your visitors, use them and ask for more action... You can also add other social media site's in there...

Hope this helps.

Mike G

P.S

I hope not to edit again... I really do.

mikeyman120 · 10-08-2009, 06:49 AM

I see you put the opt in above the fold. Looks great. One of the coolest squeeze pages I have seen recently. I like the countdown it seems to blend right in with the header. How are you going to remove that or do you just have another header for after launch?

Mike

AdamLCasey · 10-08-2009, 07:29 AM

@Mike Hersh
Thanks for the secondary twitter banner idea! Implementing that reet now! Awesome.
We feel that the pdf is very closely related to our theme. It's the theory and the theme is the tool to put that theory into practice. Thanks for the advice though maybe we should make it clearer that this is the case?

@Mikeyman,

Yeah the header will be changed once we go live.
Thanks for your feedback.

10-07-2009, 05:48 PM	#1
AdamLCasey Active Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Manchester UK Posts: 92 Thanks: 12 Thanked 23 Times in 4 Posts Social Networking	Would love some feedback on my first ever product launch squeeze page Hi Warrior, Please check out my first ever squeeze page and let me know what you think. There is a free ebook in it for you and even more goodies when I launch on Tuesday 13th October. www.infoproductstheme.com Cheers Adam p.s. if your interested in beta testing for me PM me. SPECIFICALLY IF YOUR A PRO INFO PRODUCT MARKETER
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Wham HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 187 Thanks: 83 Thanked 6 Times in 5 Posts	Re: Would love some feedback on my first ever product launch squeeze page link does not work

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Wham HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 187 Thanks: 83 Thanked 6 Times in 5 Posts	Re: Would love some feedback on my first ever product launch squeeze page yeah it works now looks great

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AdamLCasey Active Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Manchester UK Posts: 92 Thanks: 12 Thanked 23 Times in 4 Posts Social Networking	Re: Would love some feedback on my first ever product launch squeeze page Thanks PatJ I'll definitely take a look at moving that above the fold. Cheers for the feedback so far, sorry about the link issues. Should be sorted now.
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Rebtl HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: U.S. Posts: 274 Thanks: 27 Thanked 17 Times in 12 Posts Contact Info	Re: Would love some feedback on my first ever product launch squeeze page I don't know how other people feel about this, but if it was me I would have the video play automatically when you load the page. I actually sat there for a second expecting to play on its own. Just don't be one of those that hides the controls to the video so the visitor can't stop it. Thats a fast way to get me to leave your page. Good looking page though Rebtl

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Will Edwards www.whitedovebooks.co.uk War Room Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: United Kingdom. Posts: 3,828 Blog Entries: 28 Thanks: 367 Thanked 717 Times in 294 Posts Social Networking	Re: Would love some feedback on my first ever product launch squeeze page Nice Twitter link thingie! Good luck, Will
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AGSniper Warrior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 14 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Would love some feedback on my first ever product launch squeeze page It's very neatly organized and easy for the eye to read! Nice job on the landing page!

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Rebtl HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: U.S. Posts: 274 Thanks: 27 Thanked 17 Times in 12 Posts Contact Info	Re: Would love some feedback on my first ever product launch squeeze page Also just noticed this, Make it more obvious that the optin on the right is the same one that video is talking about. The video says sign up and we will email you about the product launch. Which is great, but the sidebar kind of feels like a different product and optin to me. I would make the sidebar more obvious that it is for the WP theme. i.e. "Sign-Up Now to be notified when the theme is available and get this free report instantly" Also, if there is a way you could make the video player stay on the call to action screen at the very end instead of reverting back to the begining of the video that would be good too. So that the visitor is left staring at your call to action with an arrow pointing to your optin box.

10-07-2009, 10:45 PM	#12
mikeyman120 Mike-Nagle.com War Room Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: NY, USA Posts: 984 Thanks: 180 Thanked 172 Times in 102 Posts Social Networking	Re: Would love some feedback on my first ever product launch squeeze page Cool squeeze page. Maybe try the opt in box above the ebook, above the fold as mentioned. Cool video, voice might be better instead of having to read. Mike

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Regional Warrior Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: May 2009 Location: QLD Australia Posts: 605 Thanks: 810 Thanked 118 Times in 93 Posts Contact Info	Re: Would love some feedback on my first ever product launch squeeze page hey way cool , I like the design any chance you could PM me with the software you used for the video? Cheers
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cobra tatham Active Warrior Join Date: May 2009 Location: Vancouver Posts: 63 Thanks: 0 Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts Social Networking	Re: Would love some feedback on my first ever product launch squeeze page Get the opt box above fold as mentioned a few times. Also you might want to change "+email address" to "Primary Email address" because many people never even check their other email addresses. You may consider changing the "Get My Free Report" color to a solid orange. Really looks great though.... Andy
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SPress HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: San Diego, CA ,USA. Posts: 145 Thanks: 15 Thanked 22 Times in 12 Posts	Re: Would love some feedback on my first ever product launch squeeze page Put the "Get My Free Report" text along with the red arrows above the fold. Otherwise, really sharp looking. Looks like the same layout as the recent Keyword Elite squeeze page.
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10-08-2009, 04:27 AM	#16
AdamLCasey Active Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Manchester UK Posts: 92 Thanks: 12 Thanked 23 Times in 4 Posts Social Networking	Re: Would love some feedback on my first ever product launch squeeze page @Rebtl and everyone else really. I've added a large play button to the video now. How does everyone else feel about auto playing videos. I sometimes feel them to be alittle annoying especially when the sounds booming out. Thanks for all this feedback we are implementing some of the changes now. Especially the above fold one as many of you have mentioned this little/big faux pas. Keep them coming peeps Much Appreciated
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AdamLCasey Active Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Manchester UK Posts: 92 Thanks: 12 Thanked 23 Times in 4 Posts Social Networking	Re: Would love some feedback on my first ever product launch squeeze page Implemented that main optin change now. What do you all think?
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Mike Hersh Copywriter War Room Member Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: The Dark Basement Posts: 553 Thanks: 10 Thanked 57 Times in 40 Posts	Re: Would love some feedback on my first ever product launch squeeze page Looks really cool right now. To me it looks a neat product also. But that's after I watched the video 3 times and used the pause button a few times to stop every picture in the video with the details. I think you should make the video a little bit more longer with the details of every one of the "modules" to stay more. Not all the people are native english speakers/readers. I wish you the best of luck with your product launch... Mike G EDIT: Another thing I just noticed is that your ebook is not perfectly related to your product. Personally, I do need this kind of theme, but I were someone who came to your site and is not interested in your script offer, they may optin if you had a better offer. In short, your offer for optin is not appealing enough... I think you should write a short ebook related to your "thing" or offer a free video with a tactic people can use instantly. I believe that your optin rate will be a lot higher. Mike G EDIT: I'm mister edit today lol.... No seriously now... I just opted in to your early bird list and I think that you better add another twitter banner in it. Why would you spend a page that I have to close when I arrived to it, instead of asking for another call to action? Squeeze your visitors, use them and ask for more action... You can also add other social media site's in there... Hope this helps. Mike G P.S I hope not to edit again... I really do.
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mikeyman120 Mike-Nagle.com War Room Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: NY, USA Posts: 984 Thanks: 180 Thanked 172 Times in 102 Posts Social Networking	Re: Would love some feedback on my first ever product launch squeeze page I see you put the opt in above the fold. Looks great. One of the coolest squeeze pages I have seen recently. I like the countdown it seems to blend right in with the header. How are you going to remove that or do you just have another header for after launch? Mike

10-08-2009, 07:29 AM	#20
AdamLCasey Active Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Manchester UK Posts: 92 Thanks: 12 Thanked 23 Times in 4 Posts Social Networking	Re: Would love some feedback on my first ever product launch squeeze page @Mike Hersh Thanks for the secondary twitter banner idea! Implementing that reet now! Awesome. We feel that the pdf is very closely related to our theme. It's the theory and the theme is the tool to put that theory into practice. Thanks for the advice though maybe we should make it clearer that this is the case? @Mikeyman, Yeah the header will be changed once we go live. Thanks for your feedback.
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