Video Experiment

[Louise Green]

This is a quick video that I'm thinking about using on my main sales page..

YouTube - The Marketing Mind Trick

Before/if I 'go live' with it, it would be great to have feeback from you guys.

Thanks for your time

[digileaf]

I sent you a PM

[RGallowitz]

Is skin up your website?
I think the video is a great addition because it elaborates on what your service/product is about.

I think it's well presented.

[EndGame]

I like the fact that the video is scripted and you are careful about what you say (probably something to do with the NLP you have been studying).

It is also a useful introduction to NLP I guess, but what really put me off was I didn't know whether I was going to watch a video of a 1980's "US opportunity seminar" or watch a video about raves in the early 1980's.

I think the over-use of graphics and effects was distracting.

Are you using this as content on your site, or as a way of generating traffic to your site? If it is the latter and I saw it on youtube or another site, I would have stopped watching 20-30 seconds in, just because of the style of it. It seems a little hammy or over the top.

I guess everyone is different though, and what works for one, doesn't work for everyone.

[Vaan]

Hi lovelyLou

I have watched the video, It's look professional..

you just need focused on your salespages design,and be sure to fit the video on your salespages..

Remember to show what your salespages here, we want to see your hard works

Warm Regards,
Vaan

[phil.wheatley]

Hi There

Watched the video, looks very pro and really gives you authority, well done. If I'm being crital, becasue it is so well scripted, the small fluff of your lines you make when introducing Memes sticks out a bit. Also, your speech is very slow which might put people off, almost like you are trying to hypnotise the viewer...or is that what you are intending to do? ;-)

Again though, good video and I learnt some stuff I didn't know.

Phil

[Jill Carpenter]

Originally Posted by EndGame

Are you using this as content on your site, or as a way of generating traffic to your site? If it is the latter and I saw it on youtube or another site, I would have stopped watching 20-30 seconds in, just because of the style of it. It seems a little hammy or over the top.

I guess everyone is different though, and what works for one, doesn't work for everyone.

I've seen what she has. The actual instructional videos included don't have the music going but do cover all of what she has touched on in the video with much more detailed examples.

Personally, I really like what she did. I was drawn in more while watching it and didn't find it hammy. She was bringing to me some terms I was not familiar with. Perhaps if I was already in the know about all of these terms it would have come across this way?

I'm familiar with subliminal advertising - just never took a lot of time to dive into the specifics of it.

[Louise Green]

Thank you all for your feedback, it's very valuable to me.

I sent you a PM

Thank you

Is skin up your website?

Yep! It's is my site.

Are you using this as content on your site, or as a way of generating traffic to your site?

It's a product I've just finished making, the video above contains a sample chapter.

Remember to show what your salespages here, we want to see your hard works

I'm still working on the main sales page (current one is in my sig as a WSO) but I will post the finished article here

Also, your speech is very slow which might put people off, almost like you are trying to hypnotise the viewer...or is that what you are intending to do? ;-)

Aha! Nope I'm not trying to hypnotise the viewer but I'm glad you pointed out the pace. My original idea was to create a promotional video that could be turned into an interactive forum game (still writing the rules of the game though before it can be played).

Personally, I really like what she did. I was drawn in more while watching it and didn't find it hammy. She was bringing to me some terms I was not familiar with. Perhaps if I was already in the know about all of these terms it would have come across this way?

Thank you I've spoken to a few people who are into NLP, subliminals etc who are not aware of the techniques I share in the product, my fear was that I explained things in such a way that only those using standard psychological marketing techniques would gain something from it. Thankfully, your feedback and the feeback of others who have reviewed the full product, has eased my worry.

[Mmfh]

I think you have a great speaking voice! To tell you the truth though it started to drag on a little looking at the list and no movement of any kind.

Seems like speeding it up just a bit would be nice.

Good Luck!

Mm

[Louise Green]

Thank you!

I could maybe edit out the part that explains NLP from the promo video..

[steven seven]

I like your video, the video is a bit long and too many content. A lot might not have the time to hear the explanation. Explanation to long and pauses on the slide. The slide have too many distraction on flashing here and there.

Overall look professional. Good job.

[bizideas]

Hi,

I've got just a few thoughts.

At point 3:50 on your time line you refer to multiple concepts.

• Anchors
• Triggers
• Call to Action
• Memes
• Ambiguity

Now these are explained in your voice over, but, it is a video.
I think you could take advantage of relaying your bullets in a more "visual" interpretation in concert with your voice.

For example, in your "Call to Action" you could cut to a guy with a megaphone doing just that, calling to action.
For ambiguity, you could cut to an animated question mark.
For anchors, fade to a "real live" ship anchor.

These are just examples and they may not fit your presentation but doing things like this would add to your production value tremendously, therefore keeping your viewer entertained and glued to the screen.

Happy Cuttin',


Eric

[Louise Green]

Originally Posted by bizideas

These are just examples and they may not fit your presentation but doing things like this would add to your production value tremendously, therefore keeping your viewer entertained and glued to the screen.

They are some fantastic ideas, thank you!