How Do I Word My Opt-In Form?

Branlan17 · 10-17-2009, 07:01 PM

While You're Reading...

Let me send you a completely free beginner's course to exercises to get you started. These are exercises I was able to produce real results with and I want to share them with you!

Just fill out your name (or leave it blank if you want) and your e-mail address to get started.

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That's what mine says right now... but it's not getting a very good rate for how many views it's received. Do you have any suggestions on how to word this better or make opting in more appealing?

Aronya · 10-17-2009, 07:07 PM

What market is this? What kind of exercises?

Branlan17 · 10-17-2009, 07:17 PM

penis enlargement lol, should have mentioned that.

Branlan17 · 10-17-2009, 07:42 PM

lol. Anyone have any ideas? Is it too lengthy for an opt in box?

Kevin Williams · 10-17-2009, 07:48 PM

Put it in a centered table with a dotted outline around it - I noticed you aren't doing this and it tripled my opt-ins.

Make 'while you're reading' a red font - whichever read looks good.

Change 'Just fill out your name (not required) and your e-mail address to get started.' to 'I respect your privacy and hate spam as much as you do, I'll never sell or giveaway your email address' - or something along those lines at least.

Mainly do the centering and table outline though.

Aronya · 10-17-2009, 07:49 PM

Hah! Not high on the list of responses I would have expected.

OK. First, I'm assuming your opt-in form is top right corner of the web page, not a pop-up. My expectation is that the opt-in isn't being sold well enough in the page content. You have much more room to convince people there than in the corner of the page. Get that right, and you can simply say something like, "Get the proven techniques I used to get REAL results! My FREE e-course will show you EXACTLY how to add length and girth to your manhood."

Then word the submit button with something other than "Submit" - "Super Size Me!"?

Branlan17 · 10-17-2009, 08:21 PM

Just made some changes so we'll see how it goes

Steve Faber · 10-17-2009, 08:26 PM

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Don't go another day without the confidence you deserve. How to get what you've been missing is revealed in this FREE course. Sign up now. Haven't you been waiting long enough? (Especially if you're not long enough!)

You can also use some arrows pointing to your opt in. I use big, red arrows and it's increased my optins measurably.

Branlan17 · 10-17-2009, 08:44 PM

If I had been drinking milk while reading that last reply, it would have come out my nose.

Branlan17 · 10-17-2009, 08:51 PM

Oh, and is it alright to have the opt-in form on the same site as my lander? I have a multi-page lander that I also want to use for my list building. Is it ok or is a completely dedicated squeeze page necessary?

10-17-2009, 07:01 PM	#1
Branlan17 Brandon Landis - SICK SEO War Room Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Seattle, WA Posts: 883 Thanks: 145 Thanked 56 Times in 32 Posts	How Do I Word My Opt-In Form? While You're Reading... Let me send you a completely free beginner's course to exercises to get you started. These are exercises I was able to produce real results with and I want to share them with you! Just fill out your name (or leave it blank if you want) and your e-mail address to get started. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- That's what mine says right now... but it's not getting a very good rate for how many views it's received. Do you have any suggestions on how to word this better or make opting in more appealing?

10-17-2009, 07:07 PM	#2
Aronya Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Escondido, CA. Becase San Marcos just wasn't hot enough. Posts: 510 Thanks: 35 Thanked 56 Times in 55 Posts	Re: How Do I Word My Opt-In Form? What market is this? What kind of exercises?

10-17-2009, 07:17 PM	#3
Branlan17 Brandon Landis - SICK SEO War Room Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Seattle, WA Posts: 883 Thanks: 145 Thanked 56 Times in 32 Posts	Re: How Do I Word My Opt-In Form? penis enlargement lol, should have mentioned that.

10-17-2009, 07:42 PM	#4
Branlan17 Brandon Landis - SICK SEO War Room Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Seattle, WA Posts: 883 Thanks: 145 Thanked 56 Times in 32 Posts	Re: How Do I Word My Opt-In Form? lol. Anyone have any ideas? Is it too lengthy for an opt in box?

10-17-2009, 07:48 PM	#5
Kevin Williams Power-Writer/Programmer War Room Member Join Date: May 2009 Location: Eugene, OR Posts: 515 Thanks: 78 Thanked 86 Times in 64 Posts	Re: How Do I Word My Opt-In Form? Put it in a centered table with a dotted outline around it - I noticed you aren't doing this and it tripled my opt-ins. Make 'while you're reading' a red font - whichever read looks good. Change 'Just fill out your name (not required) and your e-mail address to get started.' to 'I respect your privacy and hate spam as much as you do, I'll never sell or giveaway your email address' - or something along those lines at least. Mainly do the centering and table outline though.
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10-17-2009, 07:49 PM	#6
Aronya Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Escondido, CA. Becase San Marcos just wasn't hot enough. Posts: 510 Thanks: 35 Thanked 56 Times in 55 Posts	Re: How Do I Word My Opt-In Form? Hah! Not high on the list of responses I would have expected. OK. First, I'm assuming your opt-in form is top right corner of the web page, not a pop-up. My expectation is that the opt-in isn't being sold well enough in the page content. You have much more room to convince people there than in the corner of the page. Get that right, and you can simply say something like, "Get the proven techniques I used to get REAL results! My FREE e-course will show you EXACTLY how to add length and girth to your manhood." Then word the submit button with something other than "Submit" - "Super Size Me!"?

10-17-2009, 08:21 PM	#7
Branlan17 Brandon Landis - SICK SEO War Room Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Seattle, WA Posts: 883 Thanks: 145 Thanked 56 Times in 32 Posts	Re: How Do I Word My Opt-In Form? Just made some changes so we'll see how it goes

10-17-2009, 08:26 PM	#8
Steve Faber "Opportunitiesaplenty" War Room Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Redmond,WA, USA . Posts: 735 Thanks: 381 Thanked 160 Times in 98 Posts Social Networking	Re: How Do I Word My Opt-In Form? "Hey Shorty! Want to start growing where it counts RIGHT NOW! Well, you can. Discover insider secrets to size and control you can use today. They're revealed in my special insider's e-course. Don't go another day without the confidence you deserve. How to get what you've been missing is revealed in this FREE course. Sign up now. Haven't you been waiting long enough? (Especially if you're not long enough!) You can also use some arrows pointing to your opt in. I use big, red arrows and it's increased my optins measurably.
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10-17-2009, 08:44 PM	#9
Branlan17 Brandon Landis - SICK SEO War Room Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Seattle, WA Posts: 883 Thanks: 145 Thanked 56 Times in 32 Posts	Re: How Do I Word My Opt-In Form? If I had been drinking milk while reading that last reply, it would have come out my nose.

10-17-2009, 08:51 PM	#10
Branlan17 Brandon Landis - SICK SEO War Room Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Seattle, WA Posts: 883 Thanks: 145 Thanked 56 Times in 32 Posts	Re: How Do I Word My Opt-In Form? Oh, and is it alright to have the opt-in form on the same site as my lander? I have a multi-page lander that I also want to use for my list building. Is it ok or is a completely dedicated squeeze page necessary?