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10-19-2009, 06:05 AM
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| HyperActive Warrior War Room Member  Join Date: Sep 2009
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|  My Landing Page - What Do You Experts Think?
Well, I've never been good at creating landing pages. I don't know what it is, but I just don't really know how to make them convert. So, I was hoping that some warriors who are experts with landing pages could throw me some tips. Here is the page Mafia Wars Bots and Cheats (Please Do Not click the hoplinks, cus my stats get screwy, lol) In no way am I trying to promote it...I just want some help with it. Do I need more links? More pictures? Basically, tell me what makes it a piece of crap! I need the criticism! Thanks a ton! |
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“Today's scientists have substituted mathematics for experiments, and they wander off through equation after equation, and eventually build a structure which has no relation to reality.” -Nikola Tesla
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10-19-2009, 09:08 AM
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| Senior Warrior Member War Room Member  Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: West of Rockies
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| Re: My Landing Page - What Do You Experts Think?
One thing... you have Adsense on the page which means you stand to lose visitors. I know you are probably thinking "If they are not interested in Mafia Wars perhaps they will click on the Google ads and make me some $" Maybe, but you could also lose those that might click on the affiliate links.
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10-19-2009, 09:11 AM
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10-19-2009, 09:22 AM
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| Brandon Landis - SICK SEO War Room Member  Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Seattle, WA
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| Re: My Landing Page - What Do You Experts Think?
I think a blog is a good idea but I'm not sure if you want it as your lander or not. I'm no expert but I don't know that you have the capability to build a list on blogspot... which is a very valuable asset.
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10-19-2009, 09:26 AM
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| Re: My Landing Page - What Do You Experts Think?
need clear big call to action banner with arrows
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10-19-2009, 10:32 PM
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