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My Landing Page - What Do You Experts Think?

by Burtgummer
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Well, I've never been good at creating landing pages. I don't know what it is, but I just don't really know how to make them convert. So, I was hoping that some warriors who are experts with landing pages could throw me some tips.

Here is the page Mafia Wars Bots and Cheats (Please Do Not click the hoplinks, cus my stats get screwy, lol)

In no way am I trying to promote it...I just want some help with it.

Do I need more links? More pictures? Basically, tell me what makes it a piece of crap! I need the criticism!

Thanks a ton!
#experts #landing #page
  • Profile picture of the author Scott Ames
    One thing... you have Adsense on the page which means you stand to lose visitors. I know you are probably thinking "If they are not interested in Mafia Wars perhaps they will click on the Google ads and make me some $" Maybe, but you could also lose those that might click on the affiliate links.
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    • Profile picture of the author Burtgummer
      Originally Posted by Scott Ames View Post

      One thing... you have Adsense on the page which means you stand to lose visitors. I know you are probably thinking "If they are not interested in Mafia Wars perhaps they will click on the Google ads and make me some $" Maybe, but you could also lose those that might click on the affiliate links.
      Alright, I'll pull it off.....it wasn't even showing related ads anyways.

      Thanks for the advice!
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    need clear big call to action banner with arrows
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    • Profile picture of the author Burtgummer
      Originally Posted by michael_nguyen View Post

      need clear big call to action banner with arrows
      I was debating with myself about that....I just don't want to be trying to shove the product I'm promoting in my customers face. I don't want to be 'selling' the product to my clients, if you know what I mean.
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