Solved, Thanks! Bucks to YOU for my Tagline

[Sumit Menon]

Originally Posted by avenuegirl

You have me looking up more on the difference between tagline, slogans, etc.

It can be 5 words too, and the "and" could be a "always" or something else to bind things together.

From what I'm reading, Tagline - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia I need to "create a memorable phrase that will sum up the tone and premise of a brand or product"

I'm having a problem with just using 2 words, but I'm open to others opinions on this based on what was posted above.

Can someone show me some 2 word taglines they like?

What you have Tom is great - I'm just not sure it can be summed up in only 2 words (which would be ideal)

Have you read "The Irresistible Offer - Mark Joyner". It has a swipe of good slogans. You get it for free when you sign up on Simpleology website.

[Jill Carpenter]

Originally Posted by Thomas Belknap

Wow, we are the same age yet I look so much younger.

My ex wife took my shot which is why she is a ex.

OMG, I just looked at your published DOB - I feel like an old lady if that is correct.

[Jill Carpenter]

Originally Posted by Sumit Menon

Have you read "The Irresistible Offer - Mark Joyner". It has a swipe of good slogans. You get it for free when you sign up on Simpleology website.

Ha, I have purchased like 5 of the simpleology books and courses.

But slogan and tagline are 2 different things.

[Thomas Belknap]

Originally Posted by avenuegirl

OMG, I just looked at your published DOB - I feel like an old lady if that is correct.

lol

No that isn't correct, it is just the age I look like.

I am actually 77 years old. I think that date was set when they transfered data over to this new forum.

[Sumit Menon]

Originally Posted by Thomas Belknap

What about a play on what Tom wrote.

D I V A L I C I O U S

Be proud of your diva'ness.

What does a Diva mean? When I think Diva, I can only picture Hot WWE girls.

[Thomas Belknap]

Originally Posted by Sumit Menon

What does a Diva mean? When I think Diva, I can only picture Hot WWE girls.

I thought Jill was in the WWE.

[Jill Carpenter]

Originally Posted by Thomas Belknap

lol

No that isn't correct, it is just the age I look like.

I am actually 77 years old. I think that date was set when they transfered data over to this new forum.

You are NOT 77. If you are please send me a detailed description of what you are doing every day and have done for the last 77 years and I will send you all my money now.

[Mike Anthony]

Just a quick stab at it


Avenuegirl.com

The digital street to all your needs

congratulations on the copy contest by the way.

[Jill Carpenter]

Originally Posted by Thomas Belknap

I thought Jill was in the WWE.

LOL, I just googled wwe girls and got a glimpse.

No, thats not me.

[Ken Leatherman]

Hey Jill,

You may want to give some serious thought to using the 2 word tag as it will be simple and easily remembered by those who see it. Always remember KISS.

Keep It Simple Stupid.

Ken Leatherman
The Old Geezer

[tomw]

Originally Posted by avenuegirl

What you have Tom is great - I'm just not sure it can be summed up in only 2 words (which would be ideal)

Ah...the dreaded Wikipedia.



You quoted my quip.

Trust me (and twenty award winning years in the advertising industry) the shorter, more succinct and apposite the tagline the better. It is generally the result of refinement and at each stage we try to render words redundant.

Maybe (all of) what you're looking for cannot be contained in two words...so I'll try harder.



digging for, developing and delivering delicious digitainment direct

digging for and delivering delicious digitainment direct
developing and delivering delicious digitainment direct

digging for and delivering delicious digitainment
developing and delivering delicious digitainment
delicious digitainment developed and delivered

delivering delicious digitainment direct
developing delicious digitainment direct
delivering delicious digital direct
developing delicious digital direct

delivering delicious digitainment
developing delicious digitainment
digitainment delivered deliciously
deliciously delivered digitainment
deliciously developed digitainment
digitainment deliciously developed
digitainment developed deliciously
digitainment deliciously delivered

delicious digital delivered
delicious digitainment delivered
developing delicious digital
delivering delicious digital

delicious digitainment
deliciously digital

(digitainment is a generic sector term. Just because a company has named themselves as such does not preclude your use of the term)

Tom

[Diana Lane]

'Sensational Solution Seeker'

[Diana Lane]

Second thoughts...

'Sensational Solution Supplier'

Implying that you've already got the answers might sound better than suggesting that you're going to spend all your time finding them

[Adam Carn]

Delivering Digital Data

Definitive Digital Delivery

Digital Delivery Defined

Digitally Defined

Digging Digital Data

Digging and Delivering Digital Data

Adam

[Adam Carn]

Oops looks like Tom got the digging word before me.

Adam

[tomw]

Originally Posted by Sumit Menon

What does a Diva mean? When I think Diva, I can only picture Hot WWE girls.

A diva (English pronunciation:*/ˈdiːvə/, Italian:*[ˈdiːva]) is a celebrated female singer. The term is used to describe a woman of outstanding talent in the world of opera, and by extension in theatre, cinema and popular music.

[and latterly, in many other fields]

The word entered the English language in the late 19th century. It is derived from the Italian noun diva, a female deity. The plural of the word in English is "divas"; in Italian, dive [ˈdiːve].

The basic sense of the term is "goddess."

Tom

[Jill Carpenter]

Originally Posted by Jay Sullivan

AvenueGirl - We'll Solve DEMS Problems De Easy Way!

LOL, I just went back through these.


Ok, Tom, send me a PM with your paypal so I can send you 10 bucks cause you are definitely going to need a drink after all that.

I'm toying with these 4:

deliciously digital

delicious digital delivered

delicious digitainment delivered

delivering delicious digitainment


and leaning toward the two words on the reinforcement from the old geezer.

Thanks everybody! And Thanks Tom!

[tomw]

Originally Posted by avenuegirl

LOL, I just went back through these.


Ok, Tom, send me a PM with your paypal so I can send you 10 bucks cause you are definitely going to need a drink after all that.

Thanks Jill, that's very kind of you.

However, if you scan back through this thread, you'll see that all I really did was rub a bit of polish onto Adam's thoughts. So I'd be delighted if you give the prize money to him - plus he threw out a welcome compliment in my direction!

Also, as it's now after 6.00pm here in the UK, I already have a (very) long Gin and Tonic and a Montecristo No.1 on the go.

Cheers.



Tom

[Jill Carpenter]

Originally Posted by tomw

Thanks Jill, that's very kind of you.

However, if you scan back through this thread, you'll see that all I really did was rub a bit of polish onto Adam's thoughts. So I'd be delighted if you give the prize money to him - plus he threw out a welcome compliment in my direction!

Also, as it's now after 6.00pm here in the UK, I already have a (very) long Gin and Tonic and a Montecristo No.1 on the go.

Cheers.



Tom

Enjoy! Ok then Adam, I'll send you a pm.

[Adam Carn]

Originally Posted by tomw

Thanks Jill, that's very kind of you.

However, if you scan back through this thread, you'll see that all I really did was rub a bit of polish onto Adam's thoughts. So I'd be delighted if you give the prize money to him - plus he threw out a welcome compliment in my direction!

Also, as it's now after 6.00pm here in the UK, I already have a (very) long Gin and Tonic and a Montecristo No.1 on the go.

Cheers.



Tom

Thanks Tom but I was playing for fun, you deserve the tenner.

Adam

[Ryan700]

Average is the Cream of the Crap!

We're Not Your Average Digital Solutions Provider
Any Questions?

I'm going to qualify this by saying that this is not my quote. I read a book by a former head of the Vancouver stock exchange who had this quote in his book.
The blue underlined words would be a link.

[Steven Fullman]

"Digging Your Delicious Digitalia"

Sorry, Jill, I don't understand it either...lemme have a few beers and get back to you

Steve

[Jill Carpenter]

Thanks Steve!

I got a winner already, but will email you immediately the next time.

Going to put a note back at top of thread.

It's an interesting thread in any case to see what others were coming up with.

[TelegramSam]

Divalicious Dollops of Digital Downloads

[Steven Fullman]

Shucks.

Cheers, Jill. Just make sure you email me at ~8pm Friday UK time. By midnight, you can guarantee I'll have an even more incomprehensible and unusable tagline for you!



Steve

Originally Posted by avenuegirl

Thanks Steve!

I got a winner already, but will email you immediately the next time.

Going to put a note back at top of thread.

It's an interesting thread in any case to see what others were coming up with.