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Old 10-26-2009, 10:02 AM   #1
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Default How can I improve my Sales Page?

I have my squeeze page at www.mlmsuccessontheweb.com

which gives away a free 5 day course...then it takes you to

my sales page: www.mlmsuccessontheweb.com/congrats.htm

I havn't gotten any sign ups on my sales page yet...

What can I do to make it "sell"


Thanks for your help in advance!!

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Old 10-26-2009, 10:11 AM   #2
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Default Re: How can I improve my Sales Page?

Just so you know, my FireFox extension AdBlock Plus hides your opt-in form. You should look into getting it fixed.
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Old 10-26-2009, 10:14 AM   #3
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Default Re: How can I improve my Sales Page?

THe URL seens to be invalid? you remove your salespage?

actually I also want to sources for salespage editor experts... Might be able to enhance my affiliate and product promotion... where do I go fidn all those experts?

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Old 10-26-2009, 10:16 AM   #4
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Default Re: How can I improve my Sales Page?

Perhaps a little more contrast between the title font and the content and possibly a little more colour. IMHO of course.

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Old 10-26-2009, 10:25 AM   #5
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Default Re: How can I improve my Sales Page?

The salespage didn't show up so there is a problem with the link.

Your squeeze page needs some graphics and spiced up a bit. It is rather plain looking.

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Old 10-26-2009, 10:38 AM   #6
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I think you should be more patient and inprove the promotion of your business.Make sure
it's the things people want and can bring benefit for them.Also you should make yours service distinctive and competitive.Money will never come that easily.

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Old 10-26-2009, 10:43 AM   #7
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Ya, your 2nd link seems to be invalid.

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sorry everyone, the link is fixed

www.mlmsuccessontheweb.com/congrats.htm

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I would say that you need to make it more personal. There are 1000's of pages just like this - that make the same claims and give similar information...

You have to show more of yourself so that others can know you better - make a video and give an outline of your course. That way people can see you and begin to know you as a person.

Maybe have some of your downline make brief videos of how the course helped them.

At the very least put some pictures of you on the page so that people can see that it is someone real behind the information it will make them a little more willing to sign up knowing that it's not just someone trying to get their email...
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Old 10-26-2009, 02:42 PM   #10
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I want to get into video but I don't know too much about it yet. Maybe I'll start with pictures and then move into video.

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Try to improve on your squeeze page. Make it striking for your opt-in to capture email address.. Make it user and reader friendly as well... That's a lot of examples on the wet. Google on it....

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