How can I improve my Sales Page?

RoxanneKing · 10-26-2009, 10:02 AM

I have my squeeze page at www.mlmsuccessontheweb.com

which gives away a free 5 day course...then it takes you to

my sales page: www.mlmsuccessontheweb.com/congrats.htm

I havn't gotten any sign ups on my sales page yet...

What can I do to make it "sell"

Thanks for your help in advance!!

Sour · 10-26-2009, 10:11 AM

Just so you know, my FireFox extension AdBlock Plus hides your opt-in form. You should look into getting it fixed.

Calvin Tan · 10-26-2009, 10:14 AM

THe URL seens to be invalid? you remove your salespage?

actually I also want to sources for salespage editor experts... Might be able to enhance my affiliate and product promotion... where do I go fidn all those experts?

yves · 10-26-2009, 10:16 AM

Perhaps a little more contrast between the title font and the content and possibly a little more colour. IMHO of course.

Best of luck

Kevingators · 10-26-2009, 10:25 AM

The salespage didn't show up so there is a problem with the link.

Your squeeze page needs some graphics and spiced up a bit. It is rather plain looking.

best of luck,

Kevin

Steve Powers · 10-26-2009, 10:38 AM

I think you should be more patient and inprove the promotion of your business.Make sure
it's the things people want and can bring benefit for them.Also you should make yours service distinctive and competitive.Money will never come that easily.

talfighel · 10-26-2009, 10:43 AM

Ya, your 2nd link seems to be invalid.

Tal

RoxanneKing · 10-26-2009, 11:23 AM

sorry everyone, the link is fixed

www.mlmsuccessontheweb.com/congrats.htm

Scooter2084 · 10-26-2009, 11:44 AM

I would say that you need to make it more personal. There are 1000's of pages just like this - that make the same claims and give similar information...

You have to show more of yourself so that others can know you better - make a video and give an outline of your course. That way people can see you and begin to know you as a person.

Maybe have some of your downline make brief videos of how the course helped them.

At the very least put some pictures of you on the page so that people can see that it is someone real behind the information it will make them a little more willing to sign up knowing that it's not just someone trying to get their email...

RoxanneKing · 10-26-2009, 02:42 PM

I want to get into video but I don't know too much about it yet. Maybe I'll start with pictures and then move into video.

Thanks!

Calvin Tan · 10-28-2009, 08:23 AM

Try to improve on your squeeze page. Make it striking for your opt-in to capture email address.. Make it user and reader friendly as well... That's a lot of examples on the wet. Google on it....

10-26-2009, 10:02 AM	#1
RoxanneKing Active Warrior Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 52 Thanks: 6 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Social Networking	How can I improve my Sales Page? I have my squeeze page at www.mlmsuccessontheweb.com which gives away a free 5 day course...then it takes you to my sales page: www.mlmsuccessontheweb.com/congrats.htm I havn't gotten any sign ups on my sales page yet... What can I do to make it "sell" Thanks for your help in advance!!
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10-26-2009, 10:11 AM	#2
Sour Jordan Robert War Room Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 210 Thanks: 12 Thanked 20 Times in 14 Posts	Re: How can I improve my Sales Page? Just so you know, my FireFox extension AdBlock Plus hides your opt-in form. You should look into getting it fixed.

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Calvin Tan Active Warrior Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 86 Thanks: 9 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: How can I improve my Sales Page? THe URL seens to be invalid? you remove your salespage? actually I also want to sources for salespage editor experts... Might be able to enhance my affiliate and product promotion... where do I go fidn all those experts?
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10-26-2009, 10:16 AM	#4
yves HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: U.K Posts: 413 Blog Entries: 1 Thanks: 161 Thanked 32 Times in 30 Posts	Re: How can I improve my Sales Page? Perhaps a little more contrast between the title font and the content and possibly a little more colour. IMHO of course. Best of luck

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Kevingators Active Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Ft Myers, FL Posts: 50 Thanks: 4 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts Social Networking	Re: How can I improve my Sales Page? The salespage didn't show up so there is a problem with the link. Your squeeze page needs some graphics and spiced up a bit. It is rather plain looking. best of luck, Kevin
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10-26-2009, 10:38 AM	#6
Steve Powers HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 320 Thanks: 13 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts	Re: How can I improve my Sales Page? I think you should be more patient and inprove the promotion of your business.Make sure it's the things people want and can bring benefit for them.Also you should make yours service distinctive and competitive.Money will never come that easily.
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10-26-2009, 11:23 AM	#8
RoxanneKing Active Warrior Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 52 Thanks: 6 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Social Networking	Re: How can I improve my Sales Page? sorry everyone, the link is fixed www.mlmsuccessontheweb.com/congrats.htm
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10-26-2009, 11:44 AM	#9
Scooter2084 Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Arizona - USA Posts: 28 Thanks: 4 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	Re: How can I improve my Sales Page? I would say that you need to make it more personal. There are 1000's of pages just like this - that make the same claims and give similar information... You have to show more of yourself so that others can know you better - make a video and give an outline of your course. That way people can see you and begin to know you as a person. Maybe have some of your downline make brief videos of how the course helped them. At the very least put some pictures of you on the page so that people can see that it is someone real behind the information it will make them a little more willing to sign up knowing that it's not just someone trying to get their email...

10-26-2009, 02:42 PM	#10
RoxanneKing Active Warrior Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 52 Thanks: 6 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Social Networking	Re: How can I improve my Sales Page? I want to get into video but I don't know too much about it yet. Maybe I'll start with pictures and then move into video. Thanks!
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10-28-2009, 08:23 AM	#11
Calvin Tan Active Warrior Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 86 Thanks: 9 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: How can I improve my Sales Page? Try to improve on your squeeze page. Make it striking for your opt-in to capture email address.. Make it user and reader friendly as well... That's a lot of examples on the wet. Google on it....
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