Ok.. My first non-CPA site

Tom Trotts · 10-29-2009, 12:21 AM

I've decided to try my hand at some more "traditional" IM stuff.

I've been working on a Twitter PLR package and would like some real opinions please.

I feel pretty good about it for the most part, but I think I could use some formatting lessons ;-)

I've actually really enjoyed going through the entire process. I've learned a ton on my own and ALOT of listening to you guys. It's actually quite addicting and fun.. even if it turns out I made a ton of mistakes.

Well anyways,

here it is: Twitter PLR Pack - www.webemakingmoney.com

Give it to me straight, I need to get this right before really launching it.

Tom

808glass · 10-29-2009, 01:28 AM

Cool page, nice clean, I'm interested, but the reason I would say no is that it looks like too much reading! Also, if you're selling to complete newbs they might not know what MRR or PLR is... just a thought. Hope it helps, and best of luck!

Tom Trotts · 10-29-2009, 01:36 AM

That's makes me think maybe I should put a quick little video showing the package and how to use it right on the salespage?..?

Cause it really isn't to hard.. I already have the sales page formatted EXACTLY how you see it.. minus the bookmarking button and that great picture my mug ;-)

just insert your own info and anything else you wanna change.

A video wouldn't be hard at all.. I'll get to work on somethn'

What do you think?

TTran · 10-29-2009, 02:51 AM

I actually don't think it's too much reading. I thought the graphics were beautiful and the information to be separated into short segments which is easy on the eyes.

I would recommend listing benefits of using this program.

But, I don't have any experience with selling my own products. So don't take my word for it

Giving the buyer rights to sell your package on his own would greatly devalue your product wouldn't it? It's a fresh and interesting thing that might help conversion but if you look at the big picture I'm not so sure.. again I have no experience with selling my own products so yeah.

By the way, where did you get your graphics done? I loved them.

Heuristic · 10-29-2009, 06:34 AM

Very professional and fresh looking site. The graphics are amazing. The only negative might be that you don't offer a guarantee - as in no refunds. I don't know if this would affect your bottom line or not.

greenovni · 10-29-2009, 07:09 AM

Great looking and informative. The only thing I hated (personal opinion) is the "are you sure you want to navigate away from this page bit." I know that it gets sales but it really gets to me on any website.

The site is very nice and a video showing newbies the benefits of your package would come in handy for them.

DogScout · 10-29-2009, 07:23 AM

Info on the new Twitter 'lists' and how to use them would be a good addition.

10-29-2009, 12:21 AM	#1
Tom Trotts Entrepreneur War Room Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Lebanon, OR USA Posts: 54 Thanks: 30 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Social Networking	Ok.. My first non-CPA site - Can I get some feedback plz? I've decided to try my hand at some more "traditional" IM stuff. I've been working on a Twitter PLR package and would like some real opinions please. I feel pretty good about it for the most part, but I think I could use some formatting lessons ;-) I've actually really enjoyed going through the entire process. I've learned a ton on my own and ALOT of listening to you guys. It's actually quite addicting and fun.. even if it turns out I made a ton of mistakes. Well anyways, here it is: Twitter PLR Pack - www.webemakingmoney.com Give it to me straight, I need to get this right before really launching it. Tom

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808glass Everyday I'm Hustlin War Room Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 85 Thanks: 6 Thanked 8 Times in 8 Posts	Re: Ok.. My first non-CPA site - Can I get some feedback plz? Cool page, nice clean, I'm interested, but the reason I would say no is that it looks like too much reading! Also, if you're selling to complete newbs they might not know what MRR or PLR is... just a thought. Hope it helps, and best of luck!
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10-29-2009, 01:36 AM	#3
Tom Trotts Entrepreneur War Room Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Lebanon, OR USA Posts: 54 Thanks: 30 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Social Networking	Re: Ok.. My first non-CPA site - Can I get some feedback plz? That's makes me think maybe I should put a quick little video showing the package and how to use it right on the salespage?..? Cause it really isn't to hard.. I already have the sales page formatted EXACTLY how you see it.. minus the bookmarking button and that great picture my mug ;-) just insert your own info and anything else you wanna change. A video wouldn't be hard at all.. I'll get to work on somethn' What do you think?

10-29-2009, 02:51 AM	#4
TTran Startin Young War Room Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: California, US Posts: 116 Thanks: 29 Thanked 20 Times in 9 Posts Contact Info	Re: Ok.. My first non-CPA site - Can I get some feedback plz? I actually don't think it's too much reading. I thought the graphics were beautiful and the information to be separated into short segments which is easy on the eyes. I would recommend listing benefits of using this program. But, I don't have any experience with selling my own products. So don't take my word for it Giving the buyer rights to sell your package on his own would greatly devalue your product wouldn't it? It's a fresh and interesting thing that might help conversion but if you look at the big picture I'm not so sure.. again I have no experience with selling my own products so yeah. By the way, where did you get your graphics done? I loved them.
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