Could I Get Some Feedback On This Logo????

[TommyBussey]

Hey Warriors,

I would like some feedback on this logo please

This product is freakin' ridiculously high quality, tons of video (without the fluff) and it is sort of a "rebel marketing" tactic that has worked greatly for me...i mean "rebel" like against the common grain haha

Anyways I would love to know what you all think! Thanks in advance!



Please keep the criticism as constructive as possible...I don't want to waste time reading posts about how stupid I am or anything like that haha

...but seriously

Thanks again,

Tommy

[Dan C. Rinnert]

Originally Posted by TommyBussey

This product is freakin' ridiculously high quality, tons of video (without the fluff) and it is sort of a "rebel marketing" tactic that has worked greatly for me...i mean "rebel" like against the common grain haha

The logo doesn't reflect that. The logo reflects amateur hour rebel wannabe. The logo is good in concept but poor in execution.

[Scott Ames]

Ah... I would instantly confuse that with X who is a Warrior here.

[TommyBussey]

As I said, it's not actually a "rebel" product...just something that doesn't follow the exact protocol of what everyone else is doing to build their list.

You're right that it could stand for some more development. I put it together in 5 minutes for just a quick conceptual glance.

Thanks for the feedback though.

Originally Posted by Dan C. Rinnert

The logo doesn't reflect that. The logo reflects amateur hour rebel wannabe. The logo is good in concept but poor in execution.

[TommyBussey]

Originally Posted by Scott Ames

Ah... I would instantly confuse that with X who is a Warrior here.

Good observation. Thank you.

- Tommy

[steveblum]

Looking at your image from my point of view (I was a graphics art major in college) not sure about the L and B in red.

I would keep it all 1 color. The font in "factor" kind of runs together because of it's spray paint look. Maybe try a few different fonts that are cleaner and see how to like them - same with the X.

You could also run the word "factor" across the X, I think that would look cool.

Maybe shrink the word "LISTBUILDING" to fit the top of the X, then put "factor" in the middle of the X or at the bottom to even things out - maybe center the X and/or words.

Good job at being creative, just touch it up and I think you'll have a winner!

[TommyBussey]

Originally Posted by steveblum

Looking at your image from my point of view (I was a graphics art major in college) not sure about the L and B in red.

I would keep it all 1 color. The font in "factor" kind of runs together because of it's spray paint look. Maybe try a few different fonts that are cleaner and see how to like them - same with the X.

You could also run the word "factor" across the X, I think that would look cool.

Maybe shrink the word "LISTBUILDING" to fit the top of the X, then put "factor" in the middle of the X or at the bottom to even things out - maybe center the X and/or words.

Good job at being creative, just touch it up and I think you'll have a winner!

Awesome insight! That's the kind of stuff I was looking for

- Tommy

[Kristi Warren]

Hey Tommy -
I think you have a really great start on a solid logo! The 'X' looks a little "soft" which is probably not your intent - you probably want it to look rougher, grungier, so I'd either look for a different font (if that's just a font look, which I'm guessing it is) or apply a rougher filter to it, if that's what you did. I think the smaller "factor" works okay - it looks more like spray paint on a wall, or something like that, but it's totally legible, which is important.

I think you need to find a different font for "ListBuilding." That very traditional serif font doesn't say "rebel" at all. Keep it clean and legible, but not so stuffy and traditional. I like the red and black, and the red initial letters work really well in "ListBuilding."

You've got a great start with this! Good luck with the finishing touches!

[DogScout]

A good 'universal' logo should focus on shape 1st, color second.
If you are looking for 'unconventional, then the logo should also be unconventional. I am also a graphics guy and dislike the 'centered' logos. Most famous ones are not.

I actually like it
with less wild pixels and the top words in a similar grunge font
(but not that one)
I'd check Type Oasis for one, probably a Paul Lloyd font would do if you picked the right one.
otherwise good start

[ktmurf]

I think you're on the right path. I would do a little bit of reading on the pyschology of colors and how we supposedly internalize each color and try a few different color schemes and see where you land. Plus, color variations for different deployments probably wouldn't be the worst idea.

[DonDavis]

I agree with Kristi on the font used for List Building. Seems to conventional compared to the rest of the logo. Not sure about the red L & B either.