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Can I get Some Opinions On My New Product and Site Before It goes Live

by cragar
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Hey every one..I have a new site and would like some input before I go live with it.

Niche' Assassin

Any input is welcome.Looking to launch iot htis comiong week and if you arte interested in promoting it you can sign up in the affiliate area.
#live #opinions #product #site
  • Profile picture of the author socomplete
    Man, looking at your sales page you might just sell out of copies. I like how your salespage is not that long. That can help you now and days when attention span is so short.
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    • Profile picture of the author PlumGreekMob
      At the bottom you have this

      IF You Do Not Make Money With This Training I Will Refund Your Purchase...
      FOR 30 FULL Days

      You might want to change it to this

      IF You Do Not Make Money With In 30 Days With This Training I Will Refund Your Purchase...

      Just sounds better to me.

      Great layout on it, it short simple and to the point!

      -Plum
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    • Profile picture of the author CurtisN
      Originally Posted by socomplete View Post

      Man, looking at your sales page you might just sell out of copies. I like how your salespage is not that long. That can help you now and days when attention span is so short.
      It is in the top 10 of worst sales pages I've ever seen (no offense op). It's absolutely horrendous...the product won't sell out unless there's only one or two copies (and only if you're lucky).

      Seriously cragar, don't be stingy...get your copy professionally done.
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  • Profile picture of the author CurtisN
    It looks like you paid someone $20 to do your sales letter. I could probably do a better job and I've never had any copywriting training (and that's saying a lot..lol). I have no idea what your product can do for me. Spend some money...and if you really can't, find a copywriter who's willing to JV with you.

    I'm confused by the apostrophe after the word "niche"...why is it there?

    Also, the graphics could use some bling, but this isn't as important as having good copy and a good product of course.

    Curtis
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    • Profile picture of the author peetred
      Originally Posted by CurtisN View Post


      I'm confused by the apostrophe after the word "niche"...why is it there?


      Curtis
      I agree with Curtis on some points.

      Your sales page confuses me. I don't know where to look first, what to read first... And I really don't have a clear pictures of what I would be buying.

      It sounds great... but If i Don't know exactly what I"m getting, I am not going to buy it.

      I agree that you might want to pay for someone to do the sales copy or at least clean it up so it's not so confusing.

      I'm not trying to be discouraging. I think you've done a great job so far for your first product. I know that my sales page is nothing near perfect.. I'm not a copywriter... etc. But, I do look at a lot of sales pages! :p

      That being said, I think you could spend more time cleaning up your sales page and making it better before you launch. It will be worth it, trust me.
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      • Profile picture of the author Christian Sawyer
        Ok,

        First let me start off by saying that, yes, the sales page is poor! I would definitely try to get a better design and some text formatting done to your website. I am sure you will be able to find an able Warrior to do this for you within the Warriors For Hire Section! PLEASE DO THIS, TRUST ME!

        Having said that...

        I would have that video up near the top! That video REALLY sells well, and I must say that you do know how to get in front of a camera and make a sale.

        So go from there, get a better design and some text formatting, but use that video to your advantage!

        Good luck,
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  • Profile picture of the author WD Mino
    Hi Cragar,

    Good Job!. don't listen to anyone bashing you have done a good job. i like how you just emphasized some things and not "hypnotized" the buyer i am sure this will do well. great layout simple and easy to understand and you give support an added bonus!

    Best success with it !
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  • Profile picture of the author RGallowitz
    I see some over complimentary comments here as well as ones that's too harsh.
    Personally I think you have done a great job for a first try, but you have to make some changes.

    However, here are some pointers in order to get your site looking better.

    1. Only use 2 fonts - you are currently - from what I can see - using 3-4 fonts. Not good man. And stay away from Times New Roman!

    2. You have flow problems on that page. It's hard to digest the sales content because it doesn't flow naturally. It reads like different parts where slapped in there.

    3. Your headline is all over the place. Reading 3-4 headlines in one go is just weird.

    4. I suggest you pay someone to do your copy. You will see a major difference in your sales. You can go ahead with your current copy, but I can assure you that top affiliates and JV partners will avoid partnering with you because of the copy. Remember, they want results.


    Hope that helps you out!


    Regards
    Reinhardt
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  • Profile picture of the author cragar
    Hey everyone, I am continuing to read the replies and take notes. I appreciate all that has been added so far. You guys are the best. I look forward to seeing more suggestions
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  • Profile picture of the author cragar
    YES...I MADE THE SALES PAGE...I will make some changes and if anyone has a copywriter that they would like to suggest ...please do so.
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  • Profile picture of the author cragar
    Thanks again everyone It is looking better now I hope. Any more?
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    • Profile picture of the author Christian Sawyer
      The fonts definitely look better, however, I would still try to get a better design.

      Some would argue that design doesn't matter, but this is only true if the marketer has a huge reputation. Establish one...

      -Christian
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      • Profile picture of the author iClickGraphics
        Originally Posted by Christian Sawyer View Post

        The fonts definitely look better, however, I would still try to get a better design.

        Some would argue that design doesn't matter, but this is only true if the marketer has a huge reputation. Establish one...

        -Christian
        especially the header

        and make the headline more bigger.

        also do cross browser check to make sure everything looks fine.
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        • Profile picture of the author graphicsgenie
          I agree with lots of points here, personally push the video, even if that means creating a video squeeze page with limited copy. Get the potential customer to signup for a freebie first is another option.

          For a couple of hundred dollars we could design a fantastic video squeeze that will definatly turn heads (especially with your product name) Visions flying around my head already.

          Like most have said, congratulations on taking action, just need to continue improving

          Good Luck

          Darren
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  • Profile picture of the author KimPup
    Looks to me like everyone's sales page?? Hey is that good or bad?? lol
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  • Profile picture of the author bertuseng
    You spelled sensitive wrong. You spelled it Time Sensetive. Hope that helps.
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