Your Opinions Please-sit template and content

cragar · 12-10-2009, 07:40 AM

Hello again everyone..I have made some changes to the sales page;
Niche' Assassin
I have also taken your advice and purchased professional graphics and site templates.
Care to give your opinion on which you would use:
temp1

Craig

temp2

Your Title Here

Please let me know about the changes to the sales page

You guys/gals are the bomb!
Cragar

FrancisAllard · 12-10-2009, 09:15 AM

Personally I think it looks strange, looks like a video gaming website.
I understand the name is Assassin, but that looks a little too.....cliche.

Just my opinion - I'd go for something clean, not so video game like.

MoneyRaker · 12-10-2009, 09:25 AM

Yeah it does look a bit too much, but I LOVE it! It stands out from the crowd and rich graphics are doing great these days. The most expensive mini-site+ ebooks being sold at flippa are high graphic ones ..... so i'd say Good Job!

Also ..... the previous look absolutely sucked! (sorry). seriously, you wouldn't have made a dime with that boyish page......

If you don't mind ..... how much did u spend for this look, and from where did u get it done?

Sean Ski · 12-10-2009, 10:14 AM

You'll just have to test the graphic pages with a plain sales page... Personally to me those type pages are over the top and they're everywhere you look on Clickbank (especially in the make money arena). But like I said you'll have to test; they may convert great.

LondonPaladin · 12-10-2009, 11:48 AM

The main problem with the original page is that it's too wide. It's hard for me to absorb the data. Both of the templates you are looking at are too busy. They take the word assassin too far. I like the three bullet holes in the original template. It's cool but not over the top for a graphic.

12-10-2009, 07:40 AM	#1
cragar The No Fluff Marketer War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Jackson, Michigan Posts: 123 Thanks: 16 Thanked 15 Times in 13 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Your Opinions Please-sit template and content Hello again everyone..I have made some changes to the sales page; Niche' Assassin I have also taken your advice and purchased professional graphics and site templates. Care to give your opinion on which you would use: temp1 Craig temp2 Your Title Here Please let me know about the changes to the sales page You guys/gals are the bomb! Cragar

12-10-2009, 09:15 AM	#2
FrancisAllard Warrior Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Toronto, Ontario Posts: 26 Thanks: 14 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Social Networking	Re: Your Opinions Please-sit template and content Personally I think it looks strange, looks like a video gaming website. I understand the name is Assassin, but that looks a little too.....cliche. Just my opinion - I'd go for something clean, not so video game like.
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12-10-2009, 09:25 AM	#3
MoneyRaker Active Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 85 Thanks: 14 Thanked 19 Times in 8 Posts	Re: Your Opinions Please-sit template and content Yeah it does look a bit too much, but I LOVE it! It stands out from the crowd and rich graphics are doing great these days. The most expensive mini-site+ ebooks being sold at flippa are high graphic ones ..... so i'd say Good Job! Also ..... the previous look absolutely sucked! (sorry). seriously, you wouldn't have made a dime with that boyish page...... If you don't mind ..... how much did u spend for this look, and from where did u get it done?

12-10-2009, 10:14 AM	#4
Sean Ski HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 333 Thanks: 4 Thanked 33 Times in 29 Posts	Re: Your Opinions Please-sit template and content You'll just have to test the graphic pages with a plain sales page... Personally to me those type pages are over the top and they're everywhere you look on Clickbank (especially in the make money arena). But like I said you'll have to test; they may convert great.

12-10-2009, 11:48 AM	#5
LondonPaladin SEO Assassin War Room Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 357 Thanks: 4 Thanked 45 Times in 40 Posts	Re: Your Opinions Please-sit template and content The main problem with the original page is that it's too wide. It's hard for me to absorb the data. Both of the templates you are looking at are too busy. They take the word assassin too far. I like the three bullet holes in the original template. It's cool but not over the top for a graphic.