Content advice needed

connectionsusa · 12-10-2009, 09:18 PM

Hello All-

I'm a newbie on here. I put up a salesletter website using Xsitepro to sell a divorce advice ebook and need a few critiques of it because the 'chef is not the best judge of his own meal' so to speak.

If the site is decent (howtodivorce.us) how do i get affiliates to market this site, because I don't know how to get traffic like some of you veterans... ( i assume i would do a 50/50)

you comments are appreciated - Happy Holidays!

bsmith2 · 12-10-2009, 09:27 PM

Hello,
I would love to check out your salesletter, whats the link?

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TruWebPro · 12-10-2009, 09:27 PM

Have to admit I didn't come close to reading the whole thing...but that's the point. I think you'll have a hard time getting people to read that much. You're on the right track, but it's too long, with too much plain text. My advice would be to make your points more concise, jazz things up with some bold, bulleted outlines, and exclamation, all the while taking every opportunity once a point is made to compel purchase (i.e., "...if you don't want this to happen to you, buy now!") with an associated purchase link.

One more thing: you should add an opt-in form with some teaser info and include an auto-response campaign. They work. If you don't have one and want a recommendation PM me and I'll be happy to provide it.

Best of luck,
Neil

arttse · 12-10-2009, 09:27 PM

You can register your ebook with clickbank. That's a start.

Also, email the guru's and ask them if they want to promote your ebook using their mailing list. Offer them a better discount than your clickbank affiliates.

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Originally Posted by connectionsusa

Hello All-

I'm a newbie on here. I put up a salesletter website using Xsitepro to sell a divorce advice ebook and need a few critiques of it because the 'chef is not the best judge of his own meal' so to speak.

If the site is decent (howtodivorce.us) how do i get affiliates to market this site, because I don't know how to get traffic like some of you veterans... ( i assume i would do a 50/50)

you comments are appreciated - Happy Holidays!

12-10-2009, 09:18 PM	#1
connectionsusa Warrior Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: San Diego Posts: 9 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Content advice needed Hello All- I'm a newbie on here. I put up a salesletter website using Xsitepro to sell a divorce advice ebook and need a few critiques of it because the 'chef is not the best judge of his own meal' so to speak. If the site is decent (howtodivorce.us) how do i get affiliates to market this site, because I don't know how to get traffic like some of you veterans... ( i assume i would do a 50/50) you comments are appreciated - Happy Holidays!

12-10-2009, 09:27 PM	#2
bsmith2 Offline Consultant War Room Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: ohio Posts: 36 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Content advice needed Hello, I would love to check out your salesletter, whats the link? If you would like help with obtaining quality traffic and web promotion check out my sig line.
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12-10-2009, 09:27 PM	#3
TruWebPro Active Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Arizona and Hawai'i Posts: 86 Thanks: 11 Thanked 16 Times in 13 Posts	Re: Content advice needed Have to admit I didn't come close to reading the whole thing...but that's the point. I think you'll have a hard time getting people to read that much. You're on the right track, but it's too long, with too much plain text. My advice would be to make your points more concise, jazz things up with some bold, bulleted outlines, and exclamation, all the while taking every opportunity once a point is made to compel purchase (i.e., "...if you don't want this to happen to you, buy now!") with an associated purchase link. One more thing: you should add an opt-in form with some teaser info and include an auto-response campaign. They work. If you don't have one and want a recommendation PM me and I'll be happy to provide it. Best of luck, Neil
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