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Hey Warriors, Would Love Some Landing Page Feedback.

by BeanCounter
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Need some advice. I have a product I am giving away now thru Xmas day.
I have a landing page seen HERE. If a person opts in, once they confirm, they are immediately taken to the site where they are able to stream my video.

I don't have a download page, and I know some direct to the download page from the landing page, but I just need some feedback on how this looks to you, what you would change, how I may increase conversions, etc.

Thanks, and Happy Holidays!

Todd McGuire
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  • Profile picture of the author xxxJamesxxx
    Just opted in and I haven't received the email yet but since when did Aweber start using video for their "thank you for optin in" page. I thought it was just audio?
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    • Profile picture of the author BeanCounter
      It's pretty recent. I started using the video confirmation page about 3 weeks ago when I first noticed it.

      Originally Posted by xxxJamesxxx View Post

      Just opted in and I haven't received the email yet but since when did Aweber start using video for their "thank you for optin in" page. I thought it was just audio?
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  • Profile picture of the author Paul Hancox
    Hey Todd

    I have to admit, I like your landing page ... and I think you're touching on a subject which should be very important for Internet Marketers.

    My only advice now would be for you to split test. Suggestions for improvement would only be OPINION, so start by split testing your headline.
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  • Profile picture of the author sanhal
    Originally Posted by BeanCounter View Post

    Need some advice. I have a product I am giving away now thru Xmas day.
    I have a landing page seen HERE. If a person opts in, once they confirm, they are immediately taken to the site where they are able to stream my video.

    I don't have a download page, and I know some direct to the download page from the landing page, but I just need some feedback on how this looks to you, what you would change, how I may increase conversions, etc.

    Thanks, and Happy Holidays!

    Todd McGuire
    Hi Todd

    Top Internet Marketers always say that your optin box should be above the fold.
    If they have to scroll down for it they are less likely to fill it in.

    As someone else said it's a matter of testing.

    Looks very clean and professional though.

    Good luck with it.
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    • Profile picture of the author butters
      I don't like it sorry, I just don't feel the urge to scroll down, the problem is for me, it looks like a sales page. Personally I would keep it simple, header and sub header, video on the left hand side and optin box with maybe an arrow pointing to it on the right hand side.

      I personally feel it should be above the fold, also your bullet points down the bottom, don't center them, make them all go down in a straight line. Use a bigger button for the submit button, it should be eye grabbing.
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  • Profile picture of the author rapidscc
    Hi Todd,

    You're landing page is neat. Simple yet professional.

    I agree with Sanhal though, you should test if putting
    the opt-in box higher can get you more sign-ups.

    I also signed up since accounting is a topic close to my
    heart as I've been developing accounting systems locally
    for more than 10 years before I turned full-time to Internet
    marketing.

    Haven't seen the video yet but will watch it as soon as I can

    Thanks man,

    Omar
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  • Profile picture of the author proCME
    Todd,
    I agree with butters on the looks too much like a sales page. Maybe you might try to re think the first lines to make people WANT to scroll down. I dont put too much into the looks of the bullets. If you grab them with the first line or two, they will scroll down..
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  • Profile picture of the author capper
    Hi Todd,

    The page itself looks good but I agree with the other posters that to increase your opt in rate you should have the box above the fold.

    My sugestion would be to keep everything above the fold with brief but compelling details of your offer on the right and a video screen with first slide displayed on the left.
    Put your opt in box just below or to the right of the video screen with a call to action to "get this video free". You could stream the video to the page after you grab their email address.

    Just my opinion Todd and as a newbie I have no techie knowlegde of how you would achieve this. I'm sure someone here on this forum will though.

    Yes it will look like a sales page but so what, you have seconds before they leave your page. Make the most of that time.

    Regards

    Mark
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  • Profile picture of the author Profit-smart
    I would add a banner, so its clear right away (without reading any content) what your offering. I would also change the submit button to read "Download now" and get rid of the ">>'s"
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  • Profile picture of the author Anup Mahajan
    The page looks good and very professional

    One observation from my side, keep the bullet points to the left

    Regards,
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  • Profile picture of the author talfighel
    Simple, yet a good page for you visitors to opt into your newsletter. I think that you did a good job with it.

    Tal
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  • Profile picture of the author Dennis Gaskill
    It looks pretty good to me, but I do agree with the posters who said to have the opt in above the fold and not to have your bullet points ragged-edged.
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    • Profile picture of the author Crafty Blogger
      I like it, and what you are offering looks very useful to me as well. However, I imagine this is a tough crowd to sell too!
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  • Profile picture of the author joshril
    This is a minor layout suggestion, but your bullets at the bottom are centered and look a little strange. These should be left justified in my opinion.

    I also agree that the opt-in box needs to be above the fold.

    Nice landing page overall and a great looking product.
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    • Profile picture of the author BeanCounter
      Great Feedback. Thanks everybody, I plan to implement some of the suggestions that were provided.

      Happy Holidays!

      Todd McGuire
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