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OFFLINE Business Site Review Anyone?

by Mike Adams
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What are your thoughts on my new site. It will be directed to business owners.

http://yourlocalsite.com/

There are also links in the footer to more detailed content but I have not decided if I will leave them there.

I will probably be in contact with these owners before they will reach this site. Keep in mind that it is meant to give the reasons as to why they, as a local small business, need a website.
#business #offline #review #site
  • Profile picture of the author freudianslip27
    It looks nice. I'm wondering though if it would be better to have less information on there?

    I see you have a decent-sized salesletter. That definitely works on us fellow IM'ers, but I'm wondering if business owners would give it the time of day.

    The call to action autoresponder is way at the bottom. Could you split test this with a design that fits all on one page? What do you think about having more of a squeezepage that emphasizes benefits rather than a long form salesletter?

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  • Profile picture of the author Mike Adams
    Huh.. Yea Ill split test that. Thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author Dexx
    The website font-size/text seems very clumped together and tiny compared to the bullet points and other image text.

    Lots of reading to do, might be nice to put a video up (1 - 3 minutes) that summarizes the sales page so they can watch/listen to it instead of having to read it.

    The exit pop-up form is a good idea to catch lost traffic.

    I'd probbaly toss more images on such wordy page, google screen shots, website examples, etc.
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    I made a few bucks doing something similar a few years ago, the second i stopped paying attention to it the site died off.
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    • Profile picture of the author Megas
      I would personalize it.
      Adding a name would help to give the site a personal feel, like I'm actually dealing with a person and not some anonymous site.
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    • Profile picture of the author simmo28
      sounds ok, but needs alot of work these type of offers dnt work well with sales pages. I would invest in a proper design or maybe get a nice Joomla template to work with, include some testimonals and example sites, and definetly include some sort of video summerising your services.
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