What does this line mean? (copy)...

TimothyW · 01-15-2010, 07:07 AM

I see the ad for WSO Pro.

It contains this line...

...And If You Are Selling WSOs, You MUST Use WSO Pro

Is that accurate?

Please advise.

Thanks.

-- TW

rosetrees · 01-15-2010, 07:16 AM

You said it in the post title - it's "copy". Must - as in - you MUST have this amazing diamond necklace on special offer today for JUST $45,000.

TimothyW · 01-15-2010, 07:18 AM

That could be seen as misleading. Better to say "simply must" (?)

Or (SLIGHTLY less misleading) -- If you want to list your WSO's in the most efficient way possible, you MUST [etc.]

I think the way it is now should be changed.

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TimothyW Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: , , . Posts: 1,138 Thanks: 252 Thanked 88 Times in 71 Posts	Re: What does this line mean? (copy)... That could be seen as misleading. Better to say "simply must" (?) Or (SLIGHTLY less misleading) -- If you want to list your WSO's in the most efficient way possible, you MUST [etc.] I think the way it is now should be changed.
	I hereby announce my first-ever WSO!... [NEW $5 WSO!] This EXTRA dimension GRABS your audience, ADDS CREDIBILITY! ----------------------------- Only 2 FREE slots left! -- so, don't delay...