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[keithakin]

Here is my blog:

www.AnythingSuccess.com

Enjoy! And pick me : )

[Frank Steele]

Originally Posted by Jose Delgado

Hey Cori,

I've actually gotten traffic from stumbleupon!

Maybe more people can stumble it.

Stumbleupon is with out a doubt the most useless traffic you will get if you are trying to sell something or get a click. Those users are like flies on crack in an oven! They have the tension span of lightening.

You will get allot of them, they will make your stats look cute, they will cost you allot of bandwidth, but not a dime will be made from these characters.

[roze]

My Blog,

Learn Chinese Mandarin Online With Rosie

I just get started on blogging, would like to hear your comments and suggestions for improvement.

Thanks.

[Stefan van der Merwe]

Here is my Blog: Prevention

[jhongren]

Originally Posted by roze

My Blog,

Learn Chinese Mandarin Online With Rosie

I just get started on blogging, would like to hear your comments and suggestions for improvement.

Thanks.

Hi Roze,

I think it is a good niche for learning Mandarin online.

1. One good way is to add in audio files to facilitate the learning process.

2. For Categories wise, you should break them down into different expressions such as greetings, meeting people for the first time and so on. Do model some language books you see in bookshops.

3. I think you can find some appropriate headers which can relate to "learning". Personally I like your blog theme as it is clean and the content can be read easily.

4. You can add your personal photo in your "about me" page. =) This enables your readers know you better.

Hope these tips are useful =)

Cheers,
John

[Amy Bass]

Here is mine My Debt Free Goal | My Debt Free Goal

[Tuzic]

hi,

great post & replies here too, this will be interesting.

[jhongren]

Originally Posted by Tuzic

hi,

great post & replies here too, this will be interesting.

Hi Tuzic,

Thanks for the encouragement. I realised there are many excellent blogs submitted too. At the same time, there are lots of potential for growth in the newer players. =)

So everyone gets a chance to win a prize, even for the new bloggers.

You realize Amy, another well-respected Blogger and Warrior is in this contest too. So we must all work hard during these 2 weeks contest.

Look forward to more blog submission.

Cheers,
John

[Jose Delgado]

Originally Posted by Frank Steele

Stumbleupon is with out a doubt the most useless traffic you will get if you are trying to sell something or get a click. Those users are like flies on crack in an oven! They have the tension span of lightening.

You will get allot of them, they will make your stats look cute, they will cost you allot of bandwidth, but not a dime will be made from these characters.

... and if you read one of my previous posts,

I said that I don't intend to monetize the blog for now.

[Jeremy Kelsall]

A ton of great blogs here...really gives you a good idea of just how diverse the internet really is!

[sujuncai]

Originally Posted by Randy-works-from-home

I got some really great stuff for everyone!! See this and you wont go back or broke! It's my personal guarantee!!!

~Randy

This is exciting! So Randy, where's your blog?

[jhongren]

Originally Posted by Amy Bass

Here is mine My Debt Free Goal | My Debt Free Goal

Hi Amy,

Thanks for your submission. I am thinking to review your blog because it has more advanced features which fellow Warriors can use.

1. I love your header image. From one glance, I can understand that your blog is related to clearing of debt. Did you get someone to design it for you? Hope you can share with us some tips on getting our customized header image and logo.

2. Peel away ads: Peel away ads are getting more and more common nowadays as they do not take up lots of space like other image ads. It is an ad which simulate a page which you can turn from the top right hand corner of the blog.

3. I am wondering if you want to put bullet points in the "Recent Posts". It will be easier to read. Or why not change it to a more attention grabbing line such as "Most Read Posts"?

4. In addition, I really love reading your blog and looking for somewhere I can subscribe to it. I think you can get a very big list of subscribers by placing an optin box at the top of the right sidebar, above "Search this site"

My 2 cents,
John

[Erik B]

Here is mine.. "Work at Home Secrets" A resource for those pursing work at home.

Thanks for looking!

[Sandi Valentine]

From Diapers to Deadlines: Your Online Guide to Freelance Writing Work

[jhongren]

Originally Posted by Vyliss

Here is mine, cool idea

http://getexback.net

http://www.luv-heart.com

I would like more feedback as well

Hi Vyliss,

I am trying to access your blogs so that I can review them. It has problem loading.

Let me know when it is ok.

Cheers,
John

[Vyliss]

It's up now John

[dreamzgold]

Looking forward to have a review of my blog with eagerness.

Some of the most wonderful blogs are there. Thanks for sharing everyone.

[jhongren]

Originally Posted by jhongren

Hi Vyliss,

I am trying to access your blogs so that I can review them. It has problem loading.

Let me know when it is ok.

Cheers,
John

Hi Vyliss,

I will do a review for http://www.luv-heart.com/

1. There is a spelling error for "blog" under"About Luv-Heart"

2. I think you have lots of content which is good. However it appears to me to be a whole chunk of texts as I read down.

What you can do is: make the font size of your post title bigger and add a picture before you start a new post. The pictures make your blog more pleasing and more lively.

In fact, I like the pictures in http://getexback.net/ It would be a good balance if you can add some pictures to luv-heart.com

* * *

3. Your blog width seemed to a bit wide. Make it narrower if you can.

4. In your about page (http://www.luv-heart.com/about/), add something about you...you have shared what the blog does...I believe your readers wan to know something about you too. this is how you can connect more closely with your readers.

Hope these will be useful for you. =)

Cheers,
John

[Vyliss]

Thanks John, that makes sense... it has taken me ages to find a template I liked for luv-heart... I guess it's a bit text intense... thanks

[rosetrees]

My new snoring blog

[jhongren]

Originally Posted by Triton

I think I will also start a blog.... not because I need money.... but only to get it critiqued by jhongren

Hi Triton,

Thanks for the vote of confidence. I really appreciate it. Get your blog done. There is only 7 days more before the contest ends.

Look forward to your submission soon.

Cheers,
John

[nick1123]

I will throw my blog out there:
Nick's Traffic Tricks - Nick's Traffic Tricks

[tommygadget]

OK, I'll bite: 5000 Dollars In 45 Days - My IM Voyage My IM blog where I personally challenge myself to make money and I show my readers how I do it.

TomG.

[jhongren]

Originally Posted by tommygadget

OK, I'll bite: 5000 Dollars In 45 Days - My IM Voyage My IM blog where I personally challenge myself to make money and I show my readers how I do it.

TomG.

Hi TomG,

Good to have you on board. I think your content is really very inspiring. =)

Cheers,
John

[GuruGazette]

What the heck... I have ~100 blogs but here are a few of my best:

Stock Photography & Freelance Writing by Kathy

Affiliate Marketing Profit Tools

House Design Ideas

Pretty Garden Tips

PS: I'm not competing for the prize, just showing what can be done with a so called "blog"

[lowbeelian]

Hi, This is Bee Lian from Singapore. Like to add my blogs too:

Caleb - this is about my son

Cloth Diaper - this is my passion to promote cloth diapering to save the environment

Workfromhome - this is to learn more on how to make it a success in IM

Thanks!!
Comments are welcome

[Aurelius Tjin]

Hey Warriors,

Glad I could join. Here are mine:

Aurelius Tjin’s Unstoppable Internet Marketing Blog

Graphics How To Blog

Good luck to everyone

[Ian del Carmen]

Here's mine:

Ian del Carmen

and

Fireball News

Ian del Carmen

[Alex Lin]

Here is mine Niche Crash Course

[Bon508]

John, thank you so much for doing this!

I do not currently have a blog (well, not a "real" one; hard to believe, I know), so I'm not entering your competition.

But this thread you started is priceless! Not only do we get to see the awesome blogs of Warriors (the cream of the crop!), but we get to read your critiques/improvement tips!

There's no way anyone can NOT have a better blog after studying all that this thread provides. Incredible value... at zero cost. It just doesn't get any better than that!

Yay!

[jhongren]

Originally Posted by Bon508

John, thank you so much for doing this!

I do not currently have a blog (well, not a "real" one; hard to believe, I know), so I'm not entering your competition.

But this thread you started is priceless! Not only do we get to see the awesome blogs of Warriors (the cream of the crop!), but we get to read your critiques/improvement tips!

There's no way anyone can NOT have a better blog after studying all that this thread provides. Incredible value... at zero cost. It just doesn't get any better than that!

Yay!

Hi Bon508,

Thanks alot for your compliment... This thread is really priceless...

I realised most new bloggers have difficulty contacting other bloggers of same niche. Others have challenges looking for high quality blogs to model after.

There is still 7 days to the end of the contest.

What we can do now is to:

1. Contact blogs of similar niches for link exchanges

2. Interview bloggers of same niche (and this can be content, just like what Stanley Tang did)

3. Model after the blogs which you love (there is no need to be the best, just be better each day)

4. The best part is the blogs are owned by Warriors...and if you have any question regarding any blog, just contact them through the Private Message.

Cheers,
John

[najmiyusoff]

Ah, in times like these I wished I had a blog, could really use a free cash. Good luck anyway to all bloggers!

[Dave Earley]

Hey John!

Great thread you have going. I would also like to add a brand new blog I just created: BlackBerry vs. iPhone

Thanks,

Dave

[darrenw]

Hi

Here is my blog

Rat Race Rebellion

Great idea this

[ecovergeeks]

Here is my new Sick2Debt Blog.

www.sick2debt.com

Thanks
Andy Eaton

[buckapple]

Hello,

Here's my IM blog:

NfoNut.com eBay Video Training - Internet Marketing eBay Video Training Video Training “The Easy Way”


thanks for the contest

Gary

[Graham Maddison]

I'd like to add mine if you don't mind.

Secrets of a www Home Business

Thanks,

Graham

[jhongren]

Hi,

Thank you for the many submissions.

To level the playing field and to encourage more newbie bloggers to participate, I am adding another 3 prizes.

I have added in the extra prizes in the Original post

Have a great weekend!

Cheers,
John

[tplahav]

Hi John,
You started a nice thread.
Here is my blog:
Internet Home Business Ideas and Opportunities

Thank
Tanny

[Brad Spencer]

I can't wait to see all the blogs posted here...I'm definitely gonna check on the winners and look at the improvements you suggest...

Once the winners are announced, I'm going to email this thread to my list!

Cheers,

Brad


PS- Your blogger's paycheck ebook is awesome!!!

[GT]

Hi, John:

This is a great contest! I am always for anything that encourages marketers to focus on activity and quality. Thanks for this contest!

Read my GT Bulmer Web Bizz Blog here. The focus is information, insight, inspiration and personal experience with Internet Home Business marketing.

Good luck to all!

GT

[ericabiz]

Hi John! I just saw your thread. My blog is erica.biz - Teaching you how to build an inspired, successful business. My blog has really taken off in popularity recently. I'd be curious to know what you think of it.

-Erica

[Dan Grossman]

Will there be criteria for choosing the "best blog" or will it just be whatever is most popular among the warriors that vote? Just curious

I decided this was a good opportunity to give my blog a facelift as well.

[NewbiesDiary]

hey - top idea!

here's mine... NewbiesDiary

C'mon Newbies - we want to see yours too - this is the place to get some helpful advice and constructive criticism and of course some well deserved praise for getting off your butts and creating a blog - you need to celebrate your achievements.

[jhongren]

Originally Posted by Dan Grossman

Will there be criteria for choosing the "best blog" or will it just be whatever is most popular among the warriors that vote? Just curious

I decided this was a good opportunity to give my blog a facelift as well.

Hi Dan,

It will be for the Warrior community to vote.

There are so many submissions and I am not sure if the Poll feature is enough to take it.

I am wondering if I can do a printscreen of the blogs, add the links and pdf it. Warriors can download the pdf and reply their vote in the form of a post to the thread.

The submitted blogs are all awesome and I feel all blogs deserved to be looked through.

I am also wondering if every Warrior gets 3 votes?

Would love to hear from you.

[Tony Shepherd]

Why not?

www.tony-shepherd.com

[jhongren]

Originally Posted by Tony Shepherd

Why not?

www.tony-shepherd.com

Thanks Tony.

As for the pdf with all the blogs submitted, Warriors can use it for link exchanges, cross interviews (for content), to model after and so on.

Hope this thread benefits as many Warriors as we can.

Cheers,
John

[jhongren]

Originally Posted by ericabiz

Hi John! I just saw your thread. My blog is erica.biz - Teaching you how to build an inspired, successful business. My blog has really taken off in popularity recently. I'd be curious to know what you think of it.

-Erica

Hi Erica,

It is really nice to see you in this thread.

I think your blog is really resourceful and informative.

In fact, personally I love your blog.

Some additional pointers I have:

1. I think it would be good to have the search feature moved all the way up.

2. I feel it is really smart of you to place your "subscribe" feature just below your top navigation bar. I am thinking one at the top of the sidebar will also be better.

3. I think your sidebar sequence can be like this
Opt in>>>Search>>>popular post>>>products i like>>>affiliate products for amazon>>>blog categories

4. I am just wondering if you can leave another line in between paragraphs...I find it is easier to distinguish separate paragraphs.

5. I am also thinking if you can place sub-headlines (bold them and underline them) to make your content scanneable. I think some readers would prefer to go straight to the particular content rather than looking through it from start to finish.

And I can see you enjoyed your meet up with Steve Pavlina. Would look towards to read more about your experience.

My two cents,
John

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>


Hey Warriors, 3 days more before this contest ends...add in your blog if you have yet to...everybody stands a chance to win....

Cheers,
John

[Ouroboros]

Mines more of a WordPress Blog made into a Website but I don't want to be left out!

Hydrogen Gas Saver - Your Best Fuel Saver Product

Steve

[roze]

Hi John,

I have updated my site based on your recommendations, can you please review and criticize again when you get a chance?

Learn Chinese Mandarin Online With Rosie

I get a hang of building the site now, but not sure how I can monetize the site beyond adsense and links to 2 clickbank products, any recommendations on how to proceed?



Thanks!
Roze