Looking For Feedback On My Site

by aerionmiles

Posted: 14 years ago 2 replies

INTERNET MARKETING

Hey Warriors,

Looking for some constructive feedback on my website. It's always good to get as many sets of eyes as possible to create improvements. Please pick it apart and let me know what you think. Thanks.

www.succeedwithpyxism.com

#feedback #site

carlos123 14 years ago

Hi aerion,

Here's my personal opinion and take on your site for what it's worth.

Don't try and mix the benefits of the package for travelling and how to make money from it's marketing on the same page. It takes away from the focus of the page and might confuse people.

Stick to making a page about the travel package benefits OR the benefits of the business opportunity but not both at the same time.

Get rid of all language like "matrix" this or matrix that. The moment I see matrix anything I smell an MLM and run the other way.

That's about it for my initial observations.

Carlos
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- aerionmiles 14 years ago
  
  Thanks Carlos, I appreciate your feedback and you are right.
  
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  I love to travel, especially when it's cheap and I get paid to do it.
  
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