9 {{ upvoteCount | shortNum }}
9 {{ upvoteCount | shortNum }}

Sales page review?

by AFD
8 replies
Where can I ask for a sales page review? I am not good in creating sales page I wanted to have a competitive sales page... My English is average to poor and I think I need a little bit of assistance.. thanks
#page #review #sales #sales page #sales page review
  • Profile picture of the author dsmpublishing
    Post the domain name on here and we will have a look for you or you can head over to the copy section of the forum as there is lots of advice on there.

    kind regards


    sam
    X
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[1721480].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author AFD
      Originally Posted by dsmpublishing View Post

      Post the domain name on here and we will have a look for you or you can head over to the copy section of the forum as there is lots of advice on there.

      kind regards


      sam
      X
      I'm ashamed but anyway, thanks a lot... I am not a programmer and neither a designer so this is the only thing I can do and my best..
      adsenseunderground.com

      Thanks again
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[1721503].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author x3xsolxdierx3x
      Originally Posted by dsmpublishing View Post

      Post the domain name on here and we will have a look for you or you can head over to the copy section of the forum as there is lots of advice on there.

      kind regards


      sam
      X
      If we do this, wouldn't people think we are just trying to promote our link/product?

      Should we maybe make sure our product isn't for sale....or there's no way to purchase, prior to posting it here for a sales page review?

      Does that make sense.... ?

      Don't want to come off as over promotional...
      Signature
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[1721596].message }}
      • Profile picture of the author AFD
        Originally Posted by x3xsolxdierx3x View Post

        If we do this, wouldn't people think we are just trying to promote our link/product?

        Should we maybe make sure our product isn't for sale....or there's no way to purchase, prior to posting it here for a sales page review?

        Does that make sense.... ?

        Don't want to come off as over promotional...
        That's why I did not post my domain unless asked by senior member... I will be upgrading my account to paid next couple of days.. just waiting fund from my bank to my personal paypal account..
        {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[1721626].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Aljiro
    Hi AFD

    I just took a quick look around your site and I think you need a better template or at least hire a graphics designer to create a unique sales page template.

    A few things to consider:

    The body text is not very easy to read
    Clash of colors on your page comes out as amateurish
    Ecover is not of good quality (sorry)
    Over all the sales page needs work

    I am being honest here. Personally I will not buy your product if its packaged this way.

    I hope my comments don't come off as too rough but its what I see.

    Thanks,

    Aljiro
    Signature
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[1721731].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author AFD
      Originally Posted by Aljiro View Post

      Hi AFD

      I just took a quick look around your site and I think you need a better template or at least hire a graphics designer to create a unique sales page template.

      A few things to consider:

      The body text is not very easy to read
      Clash of colors on your page comes out as amateurish
      Ecover is not of good quality (sorry)
      Over all the sales page needs work

      I am being honest here. Personally I will not buy your product if its packaged this way.

      I hope my comments don't come off as too rough but its what I see.

      Thanks,

      Aljiro
      That is very useful feedback ajljiro... I have actually a pending auction at getafreelncer regarding this thing... Just waiting weighing for bids.. maybe tomorrow I can decide... I got that ecover from my friend who has a license and I have actually no plan on using that theme... The reason why I selected wordpress is for seo purposes... I have some posts in that site at the background (not linked from homepage) that could boost my SEO..

      Thanks a lot...

      BTW: I don't understand why I am getting an error when I click the thank you button..it seems I have problem with one of my forefox plugins..
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[1721792].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author R Hagel
    AFD, I just PM'ed you regarding a sales page review, but now I realized that you probably don't have enough posts to reply to PMs (I'm not even sure if you can read them). If you'd like, you can email me at:

    rhagel [~~AT~~] rhagel [DOT] com

    Cheers,
    Becky
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[1721861].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author AFD
      Originally Posted by R Hagel View Post

      AFD, I just PM'ed you regarding a sales page review, but now I realized that you probably don't have enough posts to reply to PMs (I'm not even sure if you can read them). If you'd like, you can email me at:

      rhagel [~~AT~~] rhagel [DOT] com

      Cheers,
      Becky
      Yeah, I read your PM and yes, you are correct.. I don't have enough post... anyway I wills end you email.. thanks a lot..
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[1721882].message }}

Trending Topics