Please crtique my lens

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Warriors i have a lens and it gets decent traffic but doesn't convert. I think there is a problem in the way it is written. I just want you to check it out and let me know where it fails to entice and motivate the reader to take action. Here is the url - Height increasing exercise
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  • Profile picture of the author Anoopchawla
    Helloo warriors r u there.....
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  • Profile picture of the author JustMint
    I think the problem is twofold:

    The concept you are promoting (that someone can actually "grow" by stretching etc) is a pretty tough one to sell. That is, medically it's just not true. Sure, if people improve their posture, then some difference can be seen - but very few people are going to believe you unless you can do an amazing job of convincing them that you are for real.

    This isn't helped by your language and grammar. It would seem either English isn't your first language, or you have poor grammar/vocab/spelling. Either way, I would suggest having it completely re-written to give more of an air of authority or respectability.

    Oh, and one more thing - why would we want to click your "secret link"? - makes no sense - give us a reason to go there.
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