Help with review page please.

by 11 comments
Hello Warriors,

This is my first attempt at a review page. Could you please tell me what you think?
It's here:Win Your Ex Back Today

#internet marketing #page #review
  • Profile picture of the author Bon508
    Hi Carrie,

    It's not a bad start, but I think you can improve it a bit.

    As a visitor to your site, my first question was, "Why is someone who has been happily married for 32 years reviewing such a book?"

    So maybe you could include a paragraph on why this book was important to you. You kinda did that a little bit down towards the end (the paragraph that begins with "These methods DO work..."). But I think you need to expand on that.

    Make your review more personal. It'll help visitors to your site with the "Why should I care about this person's opinion?" question... and they'll be less likely to be skeptical and think you're just trying to sell them something.

    Good luck with your site!
  • Profile picture of the author talfighel
    Hi Carrie,

    Looks OK to me and it is a good start.

    You will also want to add a opt in newsletter form to capture people's email and name.

    I would follow Bonnie's advice. There is always some room for improvment.

  • Profile picture of the author leekhinc
    Great review page.

    I suggest you masked your affiliate link to prevent commission stealing!

    Next is to drive more traffic to your blog and make money !
  • Profile picture of the author Fairuz Talib
    Nice review. Did you read the ebook to write the review, or take it from the sales letter?

    I suggest you include the ebook cover on your review page.

    Fairuz Talib
    • Profile picture of the author oregongal
      Those are good ideas, thank you. I did read the ebook and it really does have some great stuff! I'll do some rewriting and definitely add the ebook cover.

      Any other ideas?
    • Profile picture of the author Eswar
      Add Some Relevant images. That can increase your conversion rate significantly.

  • Profile picture of the author tommygadget
    You know, I also was put off by your long married status. I don't know why. Maybe it made me feel like you didn't need this ebook and you were just helping us poor saps out? Just a thought. Perhaps you should leave that out. Split test to see...

  • Profile picture of the author tess47
    Hi Carrie,

    I think your review page is really good! There are some link cloakers you pay for, but I use viral url and it works really well for me.

    :: Colin Klinkert & Frank Bauer's ::

    Keep up the good work and best of luck to you!
    • Profile picture of the author oregongal
      Thanks again for the new comments and the interest! I really appreciate the feed back. Gives me something to work on!

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