I coming to you for help with my sales page headline. I seem to have writers block at the moment so I'm offering $10 paypal to the person with the best headline suggestion. In other words... I want to buy you a beer for helping out!
Here's the scoop...
My site is in the dating for women niche and I think my headline needs more punch to grab attention. My ebook product is based on how to get a man and keep him.
You can use this tool http://www.aminstitute.com/headline/ to analyze your headline before you submit it here.
My current headline below is scoring at 40%. Let see how high we can get the score while still sounding good.
Here's what I got so far...
Discover The Secrets Every Woman
Should Know To Attract Mr. Right
and Keep Him Interested!