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integrated squeeze page in landing page,,Please review

by TheKing
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hello

after reading some programming tutorials , finally i m able to integrate squeeze page in my landing page ... i m newbie so just need some reviews from you guys that how it looks tinyurl.com/y9pzltm and will this effect on my sales?

if you have some spare time , please look at wording of my page ....I hired one guy to write 5 articles + one landing page ...all of his articles declined by ezinearticles because of spelling mistakes and poor grammer , but i m still using his landing page

Currently i m using adwords + adbrite .....did some promotion in google news and my site comes in 1st page for 2 keywords BUT still no sale

waiting some positive reviews from you guys

Thanks
#integrated #landing #page #review #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author badboy_Nick
    You REALLY need to do a spell check. There's errors all across your salescopy which makes it look very unprofessional ... hence no sales!
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    • Profile picture of the author TheKing
      I agree with you...i will look into this thing

      From own personal experience,, before hiring anyone for writing job,check his previous work OR his demo work

      Thanks badboy_nick for your review

      Originally Posted by badboy_Nick View Post

      You REALLY need to do a spell check. There's errors all across your salescopy which makes it look very unprofessional ... hence no sales!
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  • Profile picture of the author Aira Bongco
    Hi punjabi,

    Here is my take on it.
    1. Please check your spelling and grammar errors. If you can, hire a sales copy writer.
    2. Make the opt-in box stand out more.
    3. Use more direct sentences. Again, you may hire someone.
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