Warriors: What Do You Think About This??

by A Bary
2 replies
Hello Warriors..

I am working on a blog, and I spent good amount of money and time on it, however, I still feel there's something wrong about it..

here it's :

Control Panic Attacks | Panic Relief Tips

the monetization plan depends on this review page:

Panic Away Review And $100 Bonus

I need your opinions about the money page, and if you think it has a potential for good conversions, also, the whole blog, and if you suggest any improvements..

I used this model before successfully in other niches, however, for this particular blog, things are not going well and I decided to get second opinion about it..

I was thinking about dropping the whole project, but considering the time and money spent on it, I decided to give it a last chance..

Thanks in advance...

A Bary
#warriors
  • Profile picture of the author Dan Bainbridge
    If you have used it before then I think it would / should work for this niche too. I think what might be making things difficult is simply because this is a TOP product in clickbank - everyone comes to clickbank and tries to promote this which means there is a mass of competition for the term "panic away review" - do a competition check, it is up there as one of the most competitive terms I have seen.

    This could be a good thing of course if you can rank and get traffic, but obviously you have a lot of competition.... however assuming you are able to get found and actually drive traffic then in terms of your actual review page here is some feedback:

    I think it is ok, I think it should work, but I don't think it is perfect. In my opinion it is too much actually like a sales letter. I always advise affiliates to warm people up, to pre-sell, to give a little info, to get people excited, to show them the benefits... all quickly and then send people on to the vendor for the real hard selling.... basically dont "sell", just "pre-sell", and your review page goes a little too far into really selling it for me.

    Also I think a personal review, a story, a shorter peice would work well for this type of product - I know I have seen pages which gave video testimonials about the product, and written reviews of people's experiences.

    Lastly if I'm really picking at things I think even the style / design of the page your review is on is quite different to the design, feel, and layout of the vendor site... I would either make your mini "sales / review / bonus" page a little more branded in line with them, or perhaps I would probably just take it off that sales letter format page and incorporate a master post into your blog, to direct people to that constantly, and make sure it is stickied on your front page...

    Oops, got a little carried away, but hope you don't mind me giving comment, and hope you find some of this useful
    Dan
    Signature

    Hypnosis Affiliate Program Pays 50% + $20 Join BONUS
    Real Subliminal Messages Pays 35% (world's largest subliminal site)
    SubliminalMP3s.com Pays 75%

    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[1907051].message }}
  • I personally think that it comes off too quickly like a sales page instead of a blog. Remember most people who visit a blog do so in search of some information. Maybe this approach worked for your other products, but it is obviously not working for this one. I think you should try re-address your strategy. Panic attacks can be controlled through medication and that is one thing you need to keep in mind. Ask yourself some questions... Why should someone use this product instead of a prescribed medication? What is the positive result rate? How can this be more beneficial than going to a doctor, getting evaluated and getting medicated? These are some of the doubts people may have about the product. Give them answers they want to hear, do NOT come off pushy because it will not work the same.

    In addition, you also have to consider what submp3s has said about the niche being over-saturated. Maybe there is just way too many people selling the same thing.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[1907124].message }}

Trending Topics