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May i have your thoughts and opinions for my website?

by Azhan
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Hello guys! Well firstly i hope you warriors are doing great! Well if you guys don't mind, could you guys take a look at my website? I need your thoughts and opinions. Oh and i forgot to mention that i'm doing affiliate marketing so basically it's an affiliate blog. Looking forward to hear from you guys!

Topnoisecancelingheadphones.net
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  • Profile picture of the author COPEAC Gelbs
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    • Profile picture of the author Azhan
      Originally Posted by COPEAC Gelbs View Post

      Hey - Just looking at this quickly...and i am by no means an expert at this so feel free to ignore my comments...

      You have the domain name displayed at the very top of the page, i would use that space to convey what kind of information / value you're going to be delivering to the user if they scroll down and read the details..."Your Full Proof Guide to Noise Proof Head Phones" something like that instead of displaying a domain name, they already know the domain name they're on your page so...

      I really like how the images link out to amazon to purchase but some of those links go to images, some to Amazon so i think some consistency is needed...

      And the the privacy policy, about us, contact us, ETC - those repeat the the text appears twice but only the top words / phrases are click-able...

      Overall i like the look and feel, neutral color scheme, i suppose the font size could be increased slightly i found myself leaning closer to my computer to read the bullet points for the review of each set of head phones...

      I wish you the best of luck with this website...
      Hey thanks for the advice. I'm planning to change my blog theme. To make it look a little more techy. Best of luck to you too!
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  • Profile picture of the author helisell
    This is only my opinion........

    This is a techy type product.

    Visitors are therefore more likely to be net savvy and familiar with different types of website.

    The site is quite obviously affiliate based rather than informational in nature.

    This is not a critisism but an observation.
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    • Profile picture of the author Azhan
      Originally Posted by helisell View Post

      This is only my opinion........

      This is a techy type product.

      Visitors are therefore more likely to be net savvy and familiar with different types of website.

      The site is quite obviously affiliate based rather than informational in nature.

      This is not a critisism but an observation.
      Hey helisell. Thanks for your opinion. Appreciate it. And yes i am making an affiliate based site. I will try my best to improve it. Thanks once again!
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    Originally Posted by Ken_Caudill View Post

    Has a nice techy feel to it and rings true. I like it.
    Thanks!!
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  • Profile picture of the author Mohsin Rasool
    One quick tip.,,

    Optimize your Blog Title.. Have this in Title case and spaces b/w words

    so that
    "Topnoisecancelingheadphones.net"

    Becomes

    Top Noise Canceling Headphones


    Edit:
    Also move the unimportant links from the top to footer.. like link about Privacy Policy
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  • Profile picture of the author James Dyson
    I quite like the theme, think it's pretty modern and clean looking. Here's what I would change:

    - Page title - Change this to your main keyword phrase
    - H1 tag (top of page) - Also change this to keyword phrase
    - Possibly add an optin box or some kind of lightbox - offer a short guide to noise cancelling headphones so you can build your list and then you can always contact this list with offers so you don't lose the prospect for good

    Good luck with the updates

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    • Profile picture of the author Azhan
      Originally Posted by James Dyson View Post

      I quite like the theme, think it's pretty modern and clean looking. Here's what I would change:

      - Page title - Change this to your main keyword phrase
      - H1 tag (top of page) - Also change this to keyword phrase
      - Possibly add an optin box or some kind of lightbox - offer a short guide to noise cancelling headphones so you can build your list and then you can always contact this list with offers so you don't lose the prospect for good

      Good luck with the updates

      ~James Dyson
      Hey james. Thanks for your advice! I will look forward to the things you have mentioned above.
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  • Profile picture of the author Tony Sanford
    From taking a quick look:This is just an opinion i am no expert.

    Hi there Great looking site i would use the space were you have your domain to deliver a powerfull message as to what kind of information or value you're going to be delivering to the user/customer.

    As well i found some parts hard to read in description of product the site looks great.

    Another thing you could try would be to add some articals that offer the user/customer some great advise and information and maybe add link in artical with a keyword to an offer just an idea.

    Hope this helps
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  • Profile picture of the author Marhelper
    I do like the top menu bar and the way it slides back and forth.

    I am not a big fan of the layout overall.
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    • Profile picture of the author seven777
      Azhan, great site. It's clear, simple, and looks great. The two things I had an issue with are small details compared to the problems most sites have.

      #1) The title at the top "Noise Canceling Headphones Reviews" looks nice graphically. However, I'm using two monitors - on one it shows up pretty good, but when I pull your site over to my other monitor, it's unreadable. It's the same monitor brand, the lights are just hitting it a slight bit differently. In other words, some people won't see your headline. It's very close to invisible on my second monitor, and if I hadn't already seen it on the first one I would have missed it completely.

      Play with the lights in your room, maybe open some curtains and try different angles with some sun shining in - I'll bet you find a couple situations where it's completely invisible.

      #2) While I love your large headlines in the body - the readability of a couple of the longer ones is a bit of a strain. Especially with the four line one there, my eyes skipped that headline completely. I had to go back and force myself to read it. Human eyes are lazy, they skip anything that looks intimidating - at least mine are...

      I suggest breaking it up into a big headline, then a smaller subhead on a seperate line to make it a bit softer on the eyes.
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