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My first ever squeeze page - please critique

by craigbrown
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Hi guys and gals,

I've designed first draft of my squeeze page for a free course I am offering. I'd appreciate any constructive feedback.

I'll present it here as a PDF - approx 305K. The PDF will try to open in full screen mode, simulating a browser window - this is because I have not uploaded it to a website as yet. Simply press "esc" if you wish to exit full screen mode. There are no external links inside the PDF. To continue to the next page, either press the down arrow on your keyboard or click on the "Click here to sign up" button.

Once a customer signs up for the free course, he receives a link to the training course via email and is redirected to a thank you page with further instructions as well as a OTO for an ebook.

Any advice appreciate.

Cheers.

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  • Profile picture of the author semmyw
    Originally Posted by craigbrown View Post

    Hi guys and gals,

    I've designed first draft of my squeeze page for a free course I am offering. I'd appreciate any constructive feedback.

    I'll present it here as a PDF - approx 305K. The PDF will try to open in full screen mode, simulating a browser window - this is because I have not uploaded it to a website as yet. Simply press "esc" if you wish to exit full screen mode. There are no external links inside the PDF. To continue to the next page, either press the down arrow on your keyboard or click on the "Click here to sign up" button.

    Once a customer signs up for the free course, he receives a link to the training course via email and is redirected to a thank you page with further instructions as well as a OTO for an ebook.

    Any advice appreciate.

    Cheers.

    Link via ifile.it: download | ifile.it
    Hello C I didn't seen your squeeze page. where is it?
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    • Profile picture of the author craigbrown
      Originally Posted by semmyw View Post

      Hello C I didn't seen your squeeze page. where is it?
      Hi Semmyw, to download it, you need to scroll to the bottom of the ifile.it link and click "Request download ticket". You'll then be given a "download" button. Takes three clicks to get the file, but I chose ifile.it because it's still quicker than Rapidshare.

      Cheers.
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  • Profile picture of the author anthony2
    I was looking for your website also but didn't see it.
    Why don't you just take 5mins to upload it to your webhost.
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  • Profile picture of the author kml
    Not digging the fonts for the text - looks "hacky" Doesn't flow well with the graphics.

    "How to become a 20%er" is odd - maybe add a hyphen. If it's a selling point then bold or make the 80%... more pronounced.

    "Some things shouldn't be secret, so be sure to pay it forward" - have absolutely no idea what this means

    "Most Men" - should be "Most men"

    "The Cold, Hard Facts" - not to be a grammar Nazi, but I think you only use commas when there's more then two(?)

    "Time to MAN UP..." - hmmm - not sure that works..

    good luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author Troy_Phillips
    Does everyone need to jump all the hoops to get to your squeeze page ? If so the list building is going to be real slow .
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