Please Review My Landing Page
I have my own physical product and the site for it launched last week. I started running yahoo search engine and facebook ads and I have not been seeing the conversions I want (working on some modifications before I hit Google). My ads are highly targeted and on yahoo and avoid anything general or free and stick specifically to keywords like "Best appetite suppressant", top 10 diet pills, weight loss supplements and anything else that makes it clear the person is searching for a physical product. On Facebook my ad is point blank that it is a physical product that controls appetite. I have been getting a lot of clicks for both but very few conversions. I think my product is strong and I thought the landing page was but I am thinking it must be the problem.
Here is the web-site Brazilian Weight Loss Miracle
If anyone who is experienced with landing pages can give me a critique I would appreciate it. I am working on a landing page for a split test that is a little more direct and just lays out point blank the benefits for my product and the negatives of most others on the market.
It is a appetite suppressant/weight loss product with a strong USP. It's a chocolate tablet that dissolves on your tongue and by going directly through the mucus membrane it can activate in your blood stream in 2 to 3 minutes making it work faster than all other weight loss products that come in a pill form and have to go through the gastro intestinal system to get to the blood stream.
If anyone finds the product interesting, I would be open to taking on a few exclusive affiliates. I don't want to open it up to a whole network at this point but you can e-mail me at revolutionyourself@gmail.com to talk further.
Thanks,
Ryan O'Connor
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