I need help with my mini site please someone thanks...

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Hello! I'm sort of new here, but I love this community.

Please comment or pm me if you can help...

I recently started building a sales funnel in the hypnosis niche, and paid a firm to design me a jam-up mini site


secret-hypno.com/specialoffer

the problem is i'm not a web wizard or a copywriter - I need HELP!!

I've bought a truck load of PLR ebooks to go into this deal, and am working on my own rewritten hypnosis ebook to go with the deal..

I need someone to help me finish the formatting and to write the copy for this thing, I have tried using coffee cup or kompozer and just can't get it to work for me.

i have all the ebook covers and copy for them written, does anyone here do that sort of work or could refer me? I am very anxious to get this mini site working so i can start driving traffic to it. THank you very much,

David

p.s. Anyone also know a good software to generate a decent optin page? Mine quit working properly yesterday ( geez )
#copywriting #design #formatting #mini #site
  • Profile picture of the author rickkettner
    One tip... your sub-headline reads "it seems incredible that we can offer all of these ebooks... for only $397 / $67 dollars!"

    You need to provide a "reason why". Here it seems YOU are the one surprised, instead of telling your visitors why they should be impressed with the deal. People want to know "why" they are getting a good deal. Also, no need to say "dollars" after including a $ sign.
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  • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
    Okay, a couple of things. First get yourself a sig for your profile and you can put your link in there. Until then, here's the link:
    http://www.secret-hypno.com/specialoffer/

    Next, you're asking a lot ($67) for your deal, even if it's worth it. You might consider dropping the price, beefing up the copy and adding a massive number of bonus items.

    And finally you can go to the Warrior's For Hire section and find just about any talent you need for reasonable money. Good luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author rickkettner
    Another tip: Your offer is all about "quantity" and how much they will get, but all people really want is the result. It seems like you are selling a big "assignment" (read all these books.... and more...) rather than a simple guide on how to get what they want.

    Focus on explaining the benefits of the result, as opposed to the features and size of your product.
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  • Profile picture of the author TheAttraction
    Thanks guys, I appreciate your feedback...again, the page is totally unfinished ( thats why i posted it here - on the price i'm experimenting with the exit wizard which - when they leave offers them the deal for 37, then it seems like a deal...This is my first attempt, your comments welcome, hopefully i can get it redone soon and it will flow a lot better. Dave
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