sales page need some warrior review - i want some comments before i start promoting it

by Shlomi Khutoretsky

Posted: 16 years ago 4 replies

INTERNET MARKETING

hi
thank you all for helping me so far

it is great to hear all your great advices and comments.

i made a new sales page that i am going to promote soon and i need some comments about it, so i know what's wrong and what should i fix before promoting.

here it is:
how to buy a domain name and make a fortune - the Domain Sales Machine

thanks,

shlomi

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JackieLee 16 years ago

My first thought was "who the hell is Mickie?"

Felt like I missed something, like I should have known who Mickie was.

Jackie
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- Shlomi Khutoretsky 16 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by JackieLee
  
  My first thought was "who the hell is Mickie?"
  
  Felt like I missed something, like I should have known who Mickie was.
  
  Jackie
  
  did u get curios ? didn't you wanted to read more and know who the hell is Mickie ? and how he made these 2.4 million ?
  
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JackieLee 16 years ago

Unfortunately NO I didn't

Felt like I didn't have info I should have had when I got there. Does that make sense?
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- Shlomi Khutoretsky 16 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by JackieLee
  
  Unfortunately NO I didn't
  
  Felt like I didn't have info I should have had when I got there. Does that make sense?
  
  i don't know, that's why i am asking for comments
  anything else ?
  
  thanks,
  
  shlomi
  
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sales page need some warrior review - i want some comments before i start promoting it

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