Please Critic My Sales Pitch! Promotional Ideas for Ebook Sales?

by humbledmarket Banned
2 replies
Hello,
I recently launched my new product and I have to say I believe it has some real potential and it is an excellent value for end users. I've tried to kept my price at the lowest possible but I'm not very good with promoting.

And as we all know if you can't promote it; it doesn't matter how good you know it is. It's useless!

So I need your help here of fellow experience, helpful and good hearted Warriors!

It's pretty simple. All I want is ideas for now I can promote my ebook and sell it. Where I can sell it and which forums this might be good at?

Suggestions and Feedback on my sales pitch? Is it too long? Should I add more information? Is it properly worded? Is it readable? My Sales Pitch is the link in My Signature.

I get a lot of views for my thread all over in different forums as well but there aren't any replies if only I could see bounce rates. I think my writing and extensive sales letter is a bit intimidating that people close once they get on before they can even read what it's about. What do you think?

I'd appreciate if you could tell me what I could remove from it to shorten it. I'm fairly new to product creation and sales. My first product actually.

Please provide me feedback where ever possible.

I'm not too sure if this is the right place to post this and if it isn't I apologize. I've invested a lot of money, time and effort into this ebook and now it isn't looking too good or is there still hope? Please Advice

Thanks in Advance
#critic #ebook #ideas #pitch #promotional #sales
  • Profile picture of the author Emily Meeks
    Two things... First, I'd strongly suggest removing the link, as well as your sig file (uncheck "show your signature") from this post. That's typically seen as self-promotion by the mods - a big no-no.

    Secondly, it must be said - before you even THINK about driving traffic, your copy NEEDS to be redone. If you can't afford a professional copywriter, hang out in the Copywriting section of this forum to get some tips and ideas. If you feel inclined, post a new thread asking for a critique (copy-paste your sales copy, don't link). Many copywriters will be reluctant to give free advice (as this is how many make their living), but some will still do so as a courtesy.

    I also remember a really good War Room thread on writing copy. I can PM you with it if you want.

    Kudos to you for getting your first product out there - first product is the hardest!
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  • Profile picture of the author ErnieB
    Your page needs formatted as i cant stand to try and read it when i have to keep scrolling over, its too wide.
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