Triple Profit Multiplier

[fredjr1978]

There is a Free Marketing System that was just released this last week. I am not sure if you have had a chance to read over it yet, but I did. In the first 5 minutes of reading I had lost count of the amount of grammer mistakes that I was able to catch, and I'm not an editor!

Instantly this system lost it's credibility with me, what about you? If you were to be reading an eBook or Information on a subject matter and noticed all kinds of grammer mistakes, would this make it difficult for you to read and trust it as well?

[Alexa Smith]

Originally Posted by fredjr1978

I had lost count of the amount of grammer mistakes that I was able to catch, and I'm not an editor!

I believe you, I think: an editor would using the spelling "grammar".

Originally Posted by fredjr1978

Instantly this system lost it's credibility with me, what about you?

For me, it would just have lost "its" credibility without the extraneous apostrophe.

I completely agree with you, in short. I wouldn't be able to take it seriously. And that might be my loss, and I mean it as a criticism of myself as much as a criticism of the product. But I can't say any more, otherwise that Paul Myers might be rude to me for correcting spelling on the board. And probably rightly so, to be honest.

[ExRat]

Wombacrite own goal!

[jsdgalyean]

I would definitely be suspect of something that was riddled with grammar and punctuation errors!

If they can't even spend enough time to proof read it before they publish it, how much time do you think they spent pulling together the information? And from where??

I understand that not everyone has an English degree, but really... in this world of spell checkers, etc., there's just no excuse for tons of mistakes!

But that's just my humble opinion.

[Chris Pambos]

There is a lesser amount of people who are anal with grammatical errors then there are people who really couldn't give a sh*t and just move on.

If I came across a report that contained a lot of errors such as grammar and spelling, if I found the information to be good regardless of grammar, I would most likely finish it and move on.

On the other hand, if I found the information to be crap whilst reading through the report, then yeah, I would ditch it all together.

[alvinhuang]

Hi All,

My partner Joel and myself were the ones who put out the free sytem "Triple Profit Multiplier" into the marketplace.

We're sorry about the bad grammar. Our staff did vet through the manuscript and reported all was well. Guess we'll have to be more stringent with our checks.

But that aside, our intentions were to share with others a system that worked well for us. What was able to give us a 6 figure income, to get an office and even have full-time staff.

I hope that people can look beyond the grammar and actually focus on what really matters. Thanks.

Alvin Huang

[fredjr1978]

That's big of you Alvin, thank you for speeking up

Originally Posted by alvinhuang

Hi All,

My partner Joel and myself were the ones who put out the free sytem "Triple Profit Multiplier" into the marketplace.

We're sorry about the bad grammar. Our staff did vet through the manuscript and reported all was well. Guess we'll have to be more stringent with our checks.

But that aside, our intentions were to share with others a system that worked well for us. What was able to give us a 6 figure income, to get an office and even have full-time staff.

I hope that people can look beyond the grammar and actually focus on what really matters. Thanks.

Alvin Huang

[Cass Tyson]

Originally Posted by alvinhuang

My partner Joel and myself were the ones who put out the free sytem "Triple Profit Multiplier" into the marketplace.

I hope that people can look beyond the grammar and actually focus on what really matters.

Dude. Grammar matters. (So does spelling.)

While we're on the subject of grammar (I was an editor at one time), "myself" is never used as the subject of a sentence--it is only to be used as an object. I don't understand why people don't get this! And as an object, it can only be acted on by the subject "I". E.g., "I did this to myself." No one else can do something to myself. Only I can. See how that works? You do it to yourself. They do it to themselves. Etc.

Simple test: If Joel weren't in the picture, would you EVER say "Myself put the system out"? I sincerely doubt it.

Works the same with "me," another object constantly used incorrectly as subject. Just remove the other person(s) from the equation, and the sentence should still make sense. My 5-year old says to me, "Me and my sister want to watch TV." Even he realizes that if she weren't around, he would never say, "Me want to watch TV."

Bonus!

Simple test for "its vs. it's." Remember that "it's" is always the contraction of "it" and "is". Does your sentence make sense if you replace the word "it's" with "it is?" If not, use "its." E.g., "this system lost it's credibility" becomes "this system lost it is credibility." No, that's not right, must be the possessive "its!" Woo-hoo!

/rant

PS to Alvin: I'm here because I got emails about your system, and wanted to hear what others are saying about it before I clicked the link. I searched on the name, and this thread is my first impression. Still think grammar doesn't matter?

[johnyeo90]

I will go for a spelling and grammar check before publish any article or content..good for the reputation..

[alvinhuang]

Originally Posted by fredjr1978

That's big of you Alvin, thank you for speeking up

Sure fredjr1978. Ain't perfect nor pretend to be. And thank you for pointing out those issues. We'll definitely work on improving them. =)

Alvin Huang

[JayXtreme]

As a side note..

Alvin

Your content is often fantastic... bad grammar and all

Keep pumpin' it out, dude. There are plenty who are making money as a result, so you gotta be doin' something right!

Peace

Jay

[alvinhuang]

LOL...Geez I don't know what to say. Thank you for actually putting in effort to pen that down Cassman.

While I would love for you to have access to the FREE system we're putting out. I'm sorry that the grammar bit put you off.

We will strive harder in future to pay more attention to such details. In the meantime you might want to read something else of perfect spelling and grammar. Til then...

Alvin Huang

Originally Posted by cassman

Dude. Grammar matters. (So does spelling.)

While we're on the subject of grammar (I was an editor at one time), "myself" is never used as the subject of a sentence--it is only to be used as an object. I don't understand why people don't get this! And as an object, it can only be acted on by the subject "I". E.g., "I did this to myself." No one else can do something to myself. Only I can. See how that works? You do it to yourself. They do it to themselves. Etc.

Simple test: If Joel weren't in the picture, would you EVER say "Myself put the system out"? I sincerely doubt it.

Works the same with "me," another object constantly used incorrectly as subject. Just remove the other person(s) from the equation, and the sentence should still make sense. My 5-year old says to me, "Me and my sister want to watch TV." Even he realizes that if she weren't around, he would never say, "Me want to watch TV."

Bonus!

Simple test for "its vs. it's." Remember that "it's" is always the contraction of "it" and "is". Does your sentence make sense if you replace the word "it's" with "it is?" If not, use "its." E.g., "this system lost it's credibility" becomes "this system lost it is credibility." No, that's not right, must be the possessive "its!" Woo-hoo!

/rant

PS to Alvin: I'm here because I got emails about your system, and wanted to hear what others are saying about it before I clicked the link. I searched on the name, and this thread is my first impression. Still think grammar doesn't matter?