Which Design Do You Like Better?

Dennis Cheesman · 10-21-2008, 06:17 PM

Thanks a lot for the comments

Quote:

The body copy needs some work. Make some sales and let's write the rest of this bad boy, Dennis...

Will do Brian

Dennis

AlexKaplo · 10-21-2008, 06:20 PM

I find they are both very nice but I really like

the 2ND best~!

Best of luck!

Regards,

-Alex Kaplo

Dennis Cheesman · 10-21-2008, 08:56 PM

Ok, I changed the blue header to have an arrow as well..

Breen Design #1
Green Design #1!

Blue Design #2
Blue Design #2!

Dennis

Jose Delgado · 10-21-2008, 08:59 PM

the arrow on the blue one doesn't looks as good as on the green one.

Dennis Cheesman · 10-21-2008, 09:02 PM

I changed it to the green one, but does it go with the blue?

Dennis

Jose Delgado · 10-21-2008, 09:09 PM

looks funny.

something you can do,

take the green arrow, open it in photoshop

go to image > adjustments > hue/saturation...

and start messing with it until you get that nice looking blue color.

Dennis Cheesman · 10-21-2008, 09:14 PM

Thanks Jose...

That worked perfectly! It is blue now

Dennis

dpwilliams · 10-21-2008, 09:37 PM

Hey Dennis,

I came to the conversation late...so I did not see your original work...but of the two versions you have linked to now, I like the blue one better.

Michael Oksa · 10-21-2008, 09:43 PM

Now I am starting to like the green one better. The slightly darker background allows the text area to stand out a bit more. I like the way the site name is rendered on the 1st one better.

Good changes so far.

~Michael

Dennis Cheesman · 10-21-2008, 09:54 PM

Michael.. Are you messing with my head

They both are pretty simular, so I'm just going to have to test which color converts the best

I like both, but something keeps pulling me towards the green a well..

Dennis

JFrost · 10-21-2008, 10:03 PM

Hi Dennis, I prefer the Green, #1
Many are now thinking green. Go with it.

Dennis Cheesman · 10-21-2008, 10:30 PM

Yes.. I believe I will..

Once I launch it an the traffic starts coming I will split test to see which one converts better..

I added a handwriting font image preheadline at the top.. I think it adds to it a little bit?

Dennis

VegasVince · 10-21-2008, 10:43 PM

Yo Dennis....number one is number one.

More importantly, you've come a long way, bro.

Your copy is a 360 improvement over what I looked at a while back...and I mean that truthfully.

What happened?

Are sleeping with a hot copywriting babe? Or did you'se just get that good that fast?

Rock on, bro. Congrats..for real.

P.S. Love the layout and text too. Damn....I hate it when I can't make someone cry...by ripping their copy and offer to shreds....but in this case....good job, D. I'm impressed. Much success to you'se bro.

xxxVegas Vince

Dennis Cheesman · 10-21-2008, 11:02 PM

Thanks Vince,

That means a lot coming from you

I really appreciate al the comments and help the warriors provide!

Dennis

Chris Egan · 10-21-2008, 11:12 PM

I liked No2 best.

Thanks for sharing the designs.

Chris

tiger325 · 10-21-2008, 11:57 PM

#2 hands down

sexydirk · 10-21-2008, 11:59 PM

Definately the first one. Color says alot, and the first one spoke to me through color.

Dennis Cheesman · 10-22-2008, 02:27 AM

Thanks sexydirk

Dennis

scottwood1986 · 10-22-2008, 04:30 AM

I like the first one. Like someone else said, blue is done to death a bit! :-)

ragnartm · 10-22-2008, 04:32 AM

liked the second one but hey, blue is my favorite color, but the parted words in the sub headline is just ugly to me.

Dennis Cheesman · 10-22-2008, 04:42 AM

Parted words?

What do you mean by that?

Dennis

Jose Delgado · 10-22-2008, 05:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dennis Cheesman

Parted words?

What do you mean by that?

Dennis

con-quer-ing the com-pe-ti-tion.

I have changed my mind, now I like both of them.

The handwritten style looks better.

lennelljones · 10-22-2008, 07:00 PM

Normally, my preference will be for anything blue (favorite color), but I would have to say that the green one catches my attention more in this case...

snakez0r · 10-22-2008, 07:18 PM

My vote goes to the green design.

There's just something about it that grabs my attention.. the blue one seems dull to me, even though it does look quite professional

Sergiu FUNIERU · 10-22-2008, 07:23 PM

I like both, but I like more #2 and here's why:
- The green on black, on #1, is a contrast too big for me
- The font used on #1, at the top, is very hard to read to me
(the one with "Attention Internet Marketers")

HeySal · 10-22-2008, 07:27 PM

Another vote for #2 here. It looks more professional and has an edge of sophistication the green doesn't have. The green looks like a "dazzle me" site instead of an viable business center.

Dennis Cheesman · 10-22-2008, 09:05 PM

Hey all...

Thanks for all the comments.. It really does help

Anyone else haveing problems with the:

con-quer-ing the com-pe-ti-tion.

Or the handwritten font at the top?

Again, thanks for all the replies..

Dennis

10-21-2008, 06:20 PM	#52
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10-21-2008, 08:56 PM	#53
Dennis Cheesman Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Kaufman, Texas, USA. Posts: 1,575 Blog Entries: 1 Thanks: 27 Thanked 49 Times in 33 Posts	Re: Which Design Do You Like Better? Ok, I changed the blue header to have an arrow as well.. Breen Design #1 Green Design #1! Blue Design #2 Blue Design #2! Dennis
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10-21-2008, 08:59 PM	#54
Jose Delgado ★★★★★ War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 1,314 Blog Entries: 1 Thanks: 25 Thanked 12 Times in 9 Posts	Re: Which Design Do You Like Better? the arrow on the blue one doesn't looks as good as on the green one.

10-21-2008, 09:02 PM	#55
Dennis Cheesman Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Kaufman, Texas, USA. Posts: 1,575 Blog Entries: 1 Thanks: 27 Thanked 49 Times in 33 Posts	Re: Which Design Do You Like Better? I changed it to the green one, but does it go with the blue? Dennis
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10-21-2008, 09:09 PM	#56
Jose Delgado ★★★★★ War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 1,314 Blog Entries: 1 Thanks: 25 Thanked 12 Times in 9 Posts	Re: Which Design Do You Like Better? looks funny. something you can do, take the green arrow, open it in photoshop go to image > adjustments > hue/saturation... and start messing with it until you get that nice looking blue color.

10-21-2008, 09:14 PM	#57
Dennis Cheesman Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Kaufman, Texas, USA. Posts: 1,575 Blog Entries: 1 Thanks: 27 Thanked 49 Times in 33 Posts	Re: Which Design Do You Like Better? Thanks Jose... That worked perfectly! It is blue now Dennis
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10-21-2008, 09:37 PM	#58
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10-21-2008, 09:43 PM	#59
Michael Oksa The Ethical Marketer War Room Member Join Date: May 2006 Location: Wisconsin, USA Posts: 6,652 Thanks: 1,911 Thanked 3,715 Times in 1,611 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Which Design Do You Like Better? Now I am starting to like the green one better. The slightly darker background allows the text area to stand out a bit more. I like the way the site name is rendered on the 1st one better. Good changes so far. ~Michael
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10-21-2008, 09:54 PM	#60
Dennis Cheesman Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Kaufman, Texas, USA. Posts: 1,575 Blog Entries: 1 Thanks: 27 Thanked 49 Times in 33 Posts	Re: Which Design Do You Like Better? Michael.. Are you messing with my head They both are pretty simular, so I'm just going to have to test which color converts the best I like both, but something keeps pulling me towards the green a well.. Dennis
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10-21-2008, 10:03 PM	#61
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10-21-2008, 10:30 PM	#62
Dennis Cheesman Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Kaufman, Texas, USA. Posts: 1,575 Blog Entries: 1 Thanks: 27 Thanked 49 Times in 33 Posts	Re: Which Design Do You Like Better? Yes.. I believe I will.. Once I launch it an the traffic starts coming I will split test to see which one converts better.. I added a handwriting font image preheadline at the top.. I think it adds to it a little bit? Dennis
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10-21-2008, 10:43 PM	#63
VegasVince I Am Legend War Room Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Las Vegas, Nevada...and Florida. Posts: 1,341 Blog Entries: 38 Thanks: 377 Thanked 629 Times in 216 Posts Social Networking	Re: Which Design Do You Like Better? Yo Dennis....number one is number one. More importantly, you've come a long way, bro. Your copy is a 360 improvement over what I looked at a while back...and I mean that truthfully. What happened? Are sleeping with a hot copywriting babe? Or did you'se just get that good that fast? Rock on, bro. Congrats..for real. P.S. Love the layout and text too. Damn....I hate it when I can't make someone cry...by ripping their copy and offer to shreds....but in this case....good job, D. I'm impressed. Much success to you'se bro. xxxVegas Vince
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10-21-2008, 11:02 PM	#64
Dennis Cheesman Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Kaufman, Texas, USA. Posts: 1,575 Blog Entries: 1 Thanks: 27 Thanked 49 Times in 33 Posts	Re: Which Design Do You Like Better? Thanks Vince, That means a lot coming from you I really appreciate al the comments and help the warriors provide! Dennis
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10-21-2008, 11:12 PM	#65
Chris Egan Software Wizzard War Room Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: UK. Posts: 1,185 Blog Entries: 4 Thanks: 225 Thanked 141 Times in 97 Posts Social Networking	Re: Which Design Do You Like Better? I liked No2 best. Thanks for sharing the designs. Chris
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tiger325 HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: , , . Posts: 233 Thanks: 0 Thanked 8 Times in 8 Posts	Re: Which Design Do You Like Better? #2 hands down

10-21-2008, 11:59 PM	#67
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10-22-2008, 02:27 AM	#68
Dennis Cheesman Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Kaufman, Texas, USA. Posts: 1,575 Blog Entries: 1 Thanks: 27 Thanked 49 Times in 33 Posts	Re: Which Design Do You Like Better? Thanks sexydirk Dennis
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scottwood1986 Warrior Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: , , . Posts: 28 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Which Design Do You Like Better? I like the first one. Like someone else said, blue is done to death a bit! :-)
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ragnartm HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: , , Norway. Posts: 310 Thanks: 29 Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts	Re: Which Design Do You Like Better? liked the second one but hey, blue is my favorite color, but the parted words in the sub headline is just ugly to me.
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snakez0r Active Warrior Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 85 Thanks: 21 Thanked 26 Times in 8 Posts	Re: Which Design Do You Like Better? My vote goes to the green design. There's just something about it that grabs my attention.. the blue one seems dull to me, even though it does look quite professional

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10-22-2008, 09:05 PM	#77
Dennis Cheesman Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Kaufman, Texas, USA. Posts: 1,575 Blog Entries: 1 Thanks: 27 Thanked 49 Times in 33 Posts	Re: Which Design Do You Like Better? Hey all... Thanks for all the comments.. It really does help Anyone else haveing problems with the: con-quer-ing the com-pe-ti-tion. Or the handwritten font at the top? Again, thanks for all the replies.. Dennis
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