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Hi there,

Here's the link to my first ever attempt at a classic sales page:

Enterprise Package: Complete SEO Business Building Manual | StartSEOCompany.com

I know I'm missing a few of the recommended sales page elements, but I'm going to go forward with it anyway.

Let me know your thoughts and don't worry about sugar coating the truth. I might shed some private tears but I won't hold it against you.
#grade #page #sales
  • Profile picture of the author Vic Shake
    1) Your salespage is to wide need to change the design
    2) You need to provide a solution to PEOPLE. need benefits

    example:
    Start a Seo company (to generic ) vs.

    start Your own Seo company and skyrocket your income working 2 to 3 hours a day.
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  • Profile picture of the author activetrader
    If you are asking for advice on your sales page, you need to post this in the copywriting section
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  • Profile picture of the author Samuel Baker
    Either or; It will be moved to that section eventually. Way to wide, Header needs a lot of work personally.
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  • Profile picture of the author faridaziz
    Too many distractions. It took me long enough
    to "find" the buy button.
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  • Profile picture of the author manwalksintoabar
    Doesn't having a nav bar on a sales page reduce the chances of conversions? The page seems half webpage info and half sales page.

    Maybe make the logos smaller and move above the fold??

    mwiab
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