I've made changes

Iamnotherenow · 10-23-2008, 10:46 AM

I've made changes to my landing page. I need advice on what I can do to make it better. I've eliminated a lot of useless content and added a few pictures.

Here is my page Weight Loss Programs

jack7678 · 03-11-2010, 04:39 PM

you have to elaborate more and be more specific it has to catch peoples attention like ''lose ten pounds in a week'' and ''lose weight fast diet'' tehy gotta see what their looking for...good luck

10-23-2008, 10:46 AM	#1
Iamnotherenow HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: , , USA. Posts: 408 Thanks: 28 Thanked 21 Times in 9 Posts	I've made changes I've made changes to my landing page. I need advice on what I can do to make it better. I've eliminated a lot of useless content and added a few pictures. Here is my page Weight Loss Programs

03-11-2010, 04:39 PM	#2
jack7678 Warrior Member Join Date: Mar 2010 Posts: 13 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: I've made changes you have to elaborate more and be more specific it has to catch peoples attention like ''lose ten pounds in a week'' and ''lose weight fast diet'' tehy gotta see what their looking for...good luck