Could some of you please help me with advice?
I am trying to drive traffic by writing articles for ezine. I will put the end of the article and the resource box with the web site in it. Would some of you knowledgeable people please help me by looking at it to see if I am doing it ok? Am I overstating my pre-selling? Or understating? How about the web page. The home page of it is designed for the articles.
Thank you.
last bit of article is below:
"Having said all that, I know that some of you work at this and have a wonderful time playing. It's a great hobby, for sure.
In fact, it is a fine and useful hobby. It's a lot of fun and if you approach it in that sense, more power to you. It's an interesting and creative way to spend your time.
So if you are just playing at this, that's fine. But if you are trying to be responsible and use wind and solar energy to take care of those who depend on you, then this is serious business and you need to take it that way.
Information is what you simply must have if you are going to do an effective job of it.
Maybe you feel like the power generating companies are your friend, like they tell you. Or are they taking advantage of you and charging every penny they think they can get? Do they get a major portion of your paycheck, like they used to do mine?
If you are serious about learning how solar or wind power generation can free your family from the elite power companies, click and go to my website where you can learn all about the advantages of solar and wind power generation as well as frequently asked questions about using alternative energy.
You see all the changes going on around you. How sure are you that we will all have electricity in a few years?
You might have to do it yourself.
Inform yourself on the subject now. You'll be glad you did, and so will those depending on you."
Jimmy
Resource Box
Jimmy Cosmos is a freelance writer who has an abiding interest in alternate energy methods. He is concerned with what works and why it works. He believes that we shall soon have to take matters into our own hands and produce our own fuel and power or go without. Go to Jimmy's site and read information you need to take care of yourself and your family. The site is thesolarlife.net
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