How Can I Edit This Video? Financial Award + See A PINK BMW 6 SERIES sports car!

Hello there my friends and fellow warriors!..as always...seeing this is such an awesome forum to quickly get help and advice..am hoping I can count on you guys to help me out here...

Ok basically I have an issue with the FIRST 15 seconds or so of the following youtube video of mine and want to edit it (by the way I know I cant edit it when its live, but hoping to get the changes made for future uploads) here is the video on my 'fun and random videos youtube' channel lol -


Now the problem I have is the way my website address is written and looks and shows..which as you see.. SUCKS (where its the introductory clip branding me before going into the main video)

Whilst browsing youtube amazingly someone contacted me and I found someone using the same theme and look to create his very own branded intro movie clip for his videos...as found here -

YouTube - JoshBatsonX's Channel

now if you notice..that looks soooo much...better , crisp and sharper....

which basically tells me there is some sort of pre-set or template someone is using to create these videos and customising them as the person wants...i have contacted this dude and he is also having issues editing it and cannot track down / or the person he used is not willing to give him that info...rather just asking for more to re-do the project

mines was re-done but sucks as you see..vs the original preset someone used with software used...

anyway long story short

a) is there anyone here who recognises whats been used so I can edit it?..or have any idea?

b) is there anyone that can edit this to the quality I want and edit my video to something that looks better to look at?..if so please pm me and am even willing to pay for your services

c) what did everyone think of the pink car?...lol was showcased at a car enthusiast show and owned by a fellow "business associate" ..random I know lol...