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Need Opinions

by Thomas Michal
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just switched my copy and design need opinions, I am willing to trade opinions or give testimonials for advice given. Thanks. link is in the sig box
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  • Profile picture of the author Istvan Horvath
    Wrong forum.
    You should post this where it belongs: the copywriting forum.
    The Copywriting Forum
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  • Profile picture of the author Thomas Michal
    How can I move it?
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  • Profile picture of the author Thomas Michal
    Yeah I found that out so I reposted it in copywriting thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author aaallday2010
    Upon first glance I like the look and feel and how fast the site loads.

    However, here's what immediately caught my attention. Your headline says stop wasting money on what "gurus" are trying to sell you, then when I click on the link the first thing that popped out was a "click here to order button".

    Now, you're just another "guru" trying to sell me something.

    Before your visitors should know you're trying to sell them something, it should be after the video or at least half way through.

    Also, why do you make the video show on the next page? That first page would have been fine (and if you do keep it on the first page don't make the video automatically load. allow your visitors to do that).

    You might want to add a script that shows your "buy now" button a little after the video starts.

    Just my opinion.

    Good luck!!
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  • Profile picture of the author Thomas Michal
    Just revamped everything so if you have some new feedback would be great again the link is in the sig box
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