What do you think of this sales page?

by Steven Carl Kelly

Posted: 15 years ago 11 replies

INTERNET MARKETING

I got a kick out of it:

YoureAPoorLoser.com - The Official Website <=== NOT AN AFFILIATE LINK

#page #sales

Ross Kenny 15 years ago

Originally Posted by faxinator

I got a kick out of it:

YoureAPoorLoser.com - The Official Website <=== NOT AN AFFILIATE LINK

Have seen this before. Good idea but wonder what his conversions are. :confused:
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nick1123 15 years ago

It's a little hard on the eyes to read the crappy text.

I wonder how well it converts.

It's unique for sure but that doesn't guarantee success.
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Mohamed_Mnafeg 15 years ago

convert all images into powerpoint presentation and create a fanny video with your voice
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- Sean A McAlister 15 years ago
  
  Screams unprofessional.
  
  The idea behind it is fine....essentially the same concept as the Rich Jerk.
  
  You need to work on it.
  
  Try using smaller point lines, crisp colors (not pastel) and step it up a level.
  
  The copy itself is not bad....just needs a bit of work.
  The main thing is that you are trying!!!!!
  
  Keep up the good work.
  Sean
  
  EDIT---I just re-read your post...if you are not the creator then forward this thread to who ever is
  
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tommygadget 15 years ago

Here's the thing. I think it is freakin' funny as anything I've seen in a long time. The thing is, it doesn't make me want to buy anything. I love it for amusement value only. If there was a donate button as in donate so I don't have to buy my own donuts and coffee, I would probably click on that and send him a buck or two.

TomG.
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GeorgR. 15 years ago

haha, unique (i have to admit...) Whether it "sells" that way is another question...

Edit: I think there's no way to make a sale like that....
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Laura L. Harris 15 years ago

Sorry, but I dont think it will convert for your niche, try toys market.
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freelikehell 15 years ago

I really liked it! Quite similar to The Rich Jerk concept.Great job!
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mario2001 Banned 15 years ago

Very interesting i never see
something like that before.

Mario
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Andres 15 years ago

Originally Posted by faxinator

I got a kick out of it:

YoureAPoorLoser.com - The Official Website <=== NOT AN AFFILIATE LINK

The best line is "To pimp slap you" LOL!!!!!

Whoever put up that site got some brass balls - gotta love it.
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UniqueMind 15 years ago

Wow ..thats creativity mate. Really appreciate the creator and great that he/she you took the risk of experimenting such. It was definitely a Good read ..and entertaining.

But dint make me whip my credit card out.

The site is a joke to be real.

Reason 1

The testimonials: Has to have REAL one's from REAL human beings. That will convert

Reason 2

The Hint: Must remove it ..it killed my curiosity.

Reason 3

The Note at bottom: I know the creator found it to be damn funny ..but not to me. Quite insulting. Even a potential buyer on reading this would turn their back.

Reason 4

"This ugly website is for sale": Heck ..why would someone sell it when they are making loads of cash as mentioned in the sales letter! ..or atleast, thats what it sounds to a newbie. Instead he/she might try "Get a website like this one"

Reason 5

The colors: Might want to test the conversion by using 'dark' colors. Cause the lighter ones are pretty dim dull and boring.

Thats what I think

Steve
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