My first site is up!! :))

Definitely go for a good theme and get rid of the default. Quite frankly, it is ugly. A theme like iNove would be good for your chosen niche, just a thought.

The copy needs to be thoroughly checked for spelling errors and grammar. Many i's are not capitalized and the phrasing is bad in many places. This will directly effect your sales and you need to convey to your visitors that you at least took the time to write out your content legibly and can use a spell checker.

Just a few tips:

Make sure each letter beginning a new sentence is capitalized.

Need to change the question under your header to "Why did I choose..."

Go back and check then re-check all of the copy for spelling errors and correct them. If your browser does not have spell check integrated then copy and paste all of your copy into a program like Microsoft Word or Open Office.

Not an awful first attempt but you have to make sure to get a professional look because just ONE misspelled word or un-capitalized letter can have your visitors leaving the site in a flash.

Congrats mate! I would suggest you consider static sites if you want to create and manage more sites in future. I started out with half a dozen blogs a few months back and find it difficult to update them now.

Static sites - which don't mention the date of posting don't look stale if you don't update them for a few months. You may consider using the White House Pagelines theme - it is free and looks elegant.