Can you help me squeeze some convesions from this page?

Drop the header image. It pushes the bullet points too far down.

I would take the page you have, use Google's Web Optimizer, and split test with a squeeze page that has:

Headline
Sub header
bullet points
optin

All those above the fold. Those simple squeeze pages have gotten the highest sign up rate for me. But always split test you never know.

What is the one thing you want to achieve from the squeeze page? Lead capture right? The eye is often drawn towards the top right hand side. I would put the lead capture there to maximise the return on that valuable part of web real estate.

For the short squeeze page example I told you to do...cut to the point right away. The longer squeeze pages like you have tend to convert less, but could possibly turn into a better sale rate. That's why I say test.

Most of my squeeze pages have every piece of content above the fold. There isn't even an option to scroll. They convert amazingly. 50-60% like clockwork.

But, I always test a longer squeeze page that presells them a little better. I have a couple markets that these longer squeeze pages caused more sales.

I would definitely get rid of the top graphic though. It makes the site "look good", but the viewers don't care about the look...at least to a certain point.

It always helps to talk more to one person too. You are throwing for their emotions, but you are hitting them with facts.

Here's a quick example just from the points your page brings up.

Get your FREE evaluation and you could....

• Get the comfort you want without having to take the pain meds or see the therapist....
  
• Recover at an extremely faster rate...
  
• Say your final good-byes to lower back pain...
  
• All this for even less cost than you spend TODAY!!!!

I suggest you take a look at some of the squeeze pages by Tellman Knudson. Here is one of his examples. Adult ADHD secrets | Attention Deficit | Tellman Knudson . Look at his layout. Benefits, benefits benefits.

Hope it helps
Steve

Chad,

The one thing which hit me straight away when I first read your sales page was there was no real benefit when I read the headline. It didn't really hold my interest and make me want to read any further.

I would suggest working on your headline first of all.

Thanks

Rich

Hi,

I think you should increase the font size of the body a little bit.I think it's too small and looks kinda weirdish!

Cheers
Sim Aurile

Can you swap the image for text and some simple CSS?

For my eyes, the problem is headline. The attention part can be good before the headline, but the headline should address the main problem and main benefits what people will get.

For example, - Find out how you can remove intolerable back pain in ___ minutes without visiting doctor and using ______

I really do not know anything about this subject, but the idea is to address the problem and give the clear idea of the results they will get.

I hope it helps a bit,

Hey.

I took a look at your squeeze page and from a design perspective I really cringed when I saw it. This is all aesthetics may I add (sorry I am very particular about the way websites look).

So I shall start here:

I would suggest getting a new template, perhaps something like this:

Delicious Diabetic Recipes - 52 Weeks of Deliciously, Mouth-Watering Diabetic Recipes

- I've literally just uploaded that, so it's no where near finished but it looks much more professional than all the white space, titled headings without graphics e.t.c

- The font for the body text, I would suggest using Arial (I think you're using times new roman...could be wrong though). Arial is easiest to read and looks the best.

- The bolded parts, I would try colouring these, well not all of them but some of them. Underline some of them and italic some of them...don't keep them all bolded since it is annoying on the eyes and personally I prefer to separate different types of facts/figures/statistics that I want the reader to see and that I want to highlight.

- The page is a little annoying, since you have to scroll down. Perhaps you can shorten your bullet points or shrink the images or widen the page so you don't have to scroll down. You want all the page to be viewed in the top half.

Grr...you really should of edited your thread starter post...before adding that new squeeze page since I wrote the above for the old squeeze page.

The new squeeze page looks much better and already uses some of my points.

Hi. 2nd page much better. I always think you should be able to read a squeeze page without scrolling. I suspect you'd still lose people who don't want to give away their phone number. Split test name & email/ just email and see if that makes a difference.

Niggles: run a spellcheck ("Exspenses?") and maybe lose that font in the bullet points for something more readable. Also, do you really want to increase your recovery time?

you have to make it more attractive, too much white for me ...but is my opinion only... also you have to improve your titles and the other text. I want to see something to make me wanna buy that product, and so on... anyway is nice for your first one...good job

Also i dont know if this is right or not but i think that the real value that you put in there its a little too much... i know its free but still ...

Anyway have a good day and good luck

ZoomX

Hi helicopterplt,

A few years ago I remember the late Gary Halbert (one of the best and most influential copywriters of all time) writing a high converting Chiropractor ad. It was part of a newsletter he wrote. I’ve searched the net and found it for you. Have a read through. It may give you some ideas for your headline.

Here is the link: The Gary Halbert Letter

Hope it helps.

Rich

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