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RE: Not sure where to ask..

by good2go4
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Hi there,

I am not sure what forum to ask this in - I was hoping to get a couple of people to review my sales page and let me know why it isn't converting. I have tried something different from the standard format (because I had a standard long form sales letter on there and it wasn't converting either) but I am having no luck with this one either

Any helpful comments would be appreciated - see links in sig file

Thank you
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  • Profile picture of the author steve48135
    Lisa, what kind of traffic are you sending to your pages?

    Let me add that a services site needs to be completely different.
    As Charles said below, single column template for your sales. Also, and I don't mean to offend, but your family pictures shouldn't be on your sales page. Your sales page looks like a photo album. Stay in touch with me we'll brainstorm a little.

    Update- I do like your approach to marketing. Keeping it honest. Your sales copy isn't all that bad really. Besides the red bold there needs to be more text that pops. I think if you can get the format right and drive traffic you could convert nicely. In all honesty just asimple color change can boost conversions like crazy

    Have a look at my product http://blogbizmastermind.com/home.html

    Notice how the sales page includes graphics and large txt?

    You really have to be in the visitors face.
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  • Profile picture of the author Charles Amith
    Just looked at both pages. Obvious stuff first:> I would switch to a simple sales letter where the letters are on a white background. Strip out the top navigation. I also prefer single-column templates for salesletters.
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