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Are my testimonial boxes to big?

by Thomas Michal
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I just put this site together for a up coming launch, and now I'm wondering if the testimonial boxes are to big if you could take a look and give me your opinion that would be great. Thnx


The link is in my sig box.
#big #boxes #testimonial
  • Profile picture of the author automatedaffiliates
    Yeah they are. I don't feel you need that much space to prove they are real emails.
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  • Profile picture of the author Steven Carl Kelly
    I'll be brutally honest, because that's really the only way to help...

    That's one really awful and difficult page to read. Those testimonials in particular are terrible. Screenshots from your gmail account contain way too much clutter for the testimonials to be readable, and advertising a gmail account as a business account undermines credibility.

    I personally wouldn't try to figure out your sales page, and that means I wouldn't be buying.

    Sorry, no offense intended.
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  • Profile picture of the author scrofford
    Looks to me you need to learn how to write copy. This letter is missing a lot of components, not to mention those testimonials just thrown in there from you email account...well they suck...honestly. I would either hire a professional copywriter to write the letter for your product or find a good copywriting course. Either way, it's going to cost you money. It all depends on how bad you want to sell your product.
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  • Profile picture of the author KenThompson
    Hello Thomas,

    First, do you have permission to use those testimonials? That's
    pretty important, and you can't/shouldn't use them if you do not
    have their permission.

    I would suggest taking a look at clickbank, and try to find some
    sales letters in the more competitive niches. Check out how they
    use testimonials as well as other copy elements.

    If you get permission to use those testimonials, then see about
    getting a pic, too. It will look much better to have first/last name
    and geographical location.

    Good luck,


    Ken
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  • Profile picture of the author addykho
    I think right from the top, the title should have some margin space from the top.. I feel 'hard to breath' when landed on your site because it gives me a feel that the site is too congested. And it stretch too much to the right and left.. Just my 2 cents.
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