Review My Facebook Opt In Page

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Hello Warriors,

I need your expertise/input.

I just got my first ever Facebook fan page up and will start testing Facebook ads very soon.

Do you have any recommendations for my opt-in page? StartSEOCompany.com SEO Fast Start | Facebook

I want to squeeze full value out of this opt in.

Thanks in advance.
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  • Profile picture of the author mattjay
    i personally think it looks good and is to the point. could be more attention grabbing, but everything is pretty much laid out easy to understand.
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  • Profile picture of the author iamchrisgreen
    In my opinion:

    Your graphic on the left has WAY too much text. I didn't want to read it and neither will most people. For a starter, you have your logo on there twice, no need.

    The name of the page is your web address, which I think looks a little odd. What if you just called the page "Start Your Own SEO Company"?

    I like the "SEO Company Fast Start KitSign-up" ... good way to build your list. However you may want to make it more like a book / kit rather than just a graphic?

    Maybe you could also use some 'social proof' as well. Something like "We've helped Brett quick his dead end 9 - 5 job and start his awesome SEO career".. But obvioulsy one of your own testimonials.

    Hope this is useful?

    Chris
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  • Profile picture of the author Mangozoom
    I would get a professional graphic done ... it will really push up optins

    John
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