Please Evaluate my Squeeze Page options
I've been looking to purchase some solo ads and will have some ads sent out shortly. So I need your help to evaluate which squeeze page will fair me well as to maximize my investment.
I've recently been using a squeeze page from a warrior who gave out his mentor's squeeze page in the war room.
It has worked quite successful for me thus far about 50% conversion rate on average:
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However now while looking for solo ads someone told me my squeeze page was too wordy so I tried to make an effort to make it more organize and have the opt in form above the fold to increase conversions.
I found a free form in the warroom that was supposedly 60-70% Conversion and thought to work with it. so I've personalized:
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I'd like your opinion on which one you think will convert best and it'd also help if you could tell me if there is any changes I can make to make it better. There's always room for improvement; especially from a novice list builder like me
I look forward to your helpful and wise insights.
Kindest regards,
Benjamin
Author of the "Practical Internet Money guide"[B]