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Grade My Sales Page - SEO Business Product

by McBrett
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Hi Warriors,

I've finally completed the second version of the Enterprise SEO Business Package and would appreciate input on the sales page before promoting to my list.

I veered off the traditional sales letter just a bit (I hate scrolling down) and split up my sales page into four separate pages for easier browsing.

Also, the only people I'm marketing this to have signed up through my email list, which is why I made it a bit shorter than most.

With that being said, let me know what you think. I appreciate any feedback that will result in more conversions. Thanks guys and gals!

Here's the link: Enterprise SEO Business Package Beta 2.0 Available Now | StartSEOCompany.com - StartSEOCompany.com
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  • Profile picture of the author Gary King
    Face value, everything as it comes top to bottom...

    No offense, I hate the color - the teal-ish light blue looks terrible on my screen. Really hard on the eyes.

    The page that you linked to doesn't "Sell" me. It DESCRIBES the content and tells me I will get a discount IF I buy the final version.


    Sell me on the BENEFITS of getting the package... how it's going to SOLVE my problems. NOT what it includes (everything I need to start an SEO company).

    I need to hear that with the contracts included with your package, I'll never have to pay a lawyer thousands to develop my own.

    I need to be told how much I can earn by starting my own SEO company. How easy it can be to earn x amount doing so. What kind of potential there is, etc.

    B-e-n-e-f-i-t-s to buying. Not content thereof.

    I'm not sure I would post my tweets on there saying I was "moderately crunk" if I were you... sort of takes away from the "business feel" your site is portraying.

    Hope it helps!

    All success,

    Gary
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    • Profile picture of the author McBrett
      Hey thanks for the feedback my man. I'll start thinking of ways to integrate more of the benefits on the sales page.

      Brett
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