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Hey Everyone,

I have been doing my WP site. I have change the theme and layout several times. So i thought of coming here to get some advice.

My niche is dating, teaching men to get perfect girlfriend (my USP).

Please give me feedback on the theme colors, layout, content, etc.

I want to have my bounce rate to below 50%, if possible, 30%.

Welcome suggestions to improve my site.

Here is the link How to Get a Girlfriend - Advice on Dating Women

Thank you,
Joshua
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  • Profile picture of the author ytt
    I like the layout, with all the titles on 1 page, and for each title , there is a short paragraph, hence, anybody who is interested , can continue with the reading ,. If one is not interested, one can skip and go to the next title. All done on the same page and need not navigate away.
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  • Profile picture of the author Chris G
    The site looks pretty good to me. The only thing I notice is the text under the header seems odd there. Maybe remove it or change the font.
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  • Profile picture of the author AFI
    My advice to you is this: Don't post your website and give away your niche on a forum where there are 200,000+ other competitors
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    • Profile picture of the author birdie28a
      Originally Posted by AFI View Post

      My advice to you is this: Don't post your website and give away your niche on a forum where there are 200,000+ other competitors

      I totally agree, never do this. Having said that your site looks really good.
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      • Profile picture of the author joshuagan80
        Originally Posted by birdie28a View Post

        I totally agree, never do this. Having said that your site looks really good.
        I know, but I really need some feedback and suggestion. I trust that most people in this forum are good.
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        • Profile picture of the author Jayo
          Originally Posted by joshuagan80 View Post

          I know, but I really need some feedback and suggestion. I trust that most people in this forum are good.
          Oh absolutely! What's your paypal username and pw? I just need to take a look at something quick
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          • Profile picture of the author joshuagan80
            Originally Posted by Jayo View Post

            Oh absolutely! What's your paypal username and pw? I just need to take a look at something quick
            Sure, my paypal username is waitforever and pw is be-a-hacker.
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    • Profile picture of the author BrianLG
      Originally Posted by AFI View Post

      My advice to you is this: Don't post your website and give away your niche on a forum where there are 200,000+ other competitors
      I wouldn't worry too much in this case/niche. The Relationship, get the girl,get the girl back is a well known niche often used in examples. not as much as "Dog Training" though. I was just looking at an old report from Travis of BumMarketingMethod who I think may be a member here.The report "How To Earn An Easy $100 a Day In The Lucrative Relationship Niche" is a beginners nuts and bolts guide with how to set up web site/hosting etc it has the option of being an affiliate to sell his product "magic of makingup" web site same name no spaces. I got the report back in August but I think its being around for a while and a lot of Warriors would of seen it. So i think most warriors know this niche pretty well. Its one of those niches's that will always do well like health. Of course the trick is to pick the right sub niche and/or keywords
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  • Profile picture of the author nettech
    Its not a bad site, the content seems quite good.

    What I would say though is to include more relevant images to each post to make the copy seem more engaging. All that text makes your eyes go a little funny. Adding images will make it more softer for the reader and from an SEO perspective, if you optimise your images correctly, you can drive further traffic that way!

    Also, the header image looks like its floating in mid-air, if you could somehow make that fit with the rest of the site then that would be good as well. Maybe by curving the edges (and adding a shadow) or adding a border or something.

    Hope that helps
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  • Profile picture of the author pethanks
    Your site sounds interesting especially to the teenagers. Website well done!
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  • Profile picture of the author Alfred Shelver
    I must admit I do not like the 'privacy policy' and 'terms of Use' having their own menu Tabs.
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    • Profile picture of the author THK
      Originally Posted by Cathy Shelver View Post

      I must admit I do not like the 'privacy policy' and 'terms of Use' having their own menu Tabs.
      I agree with Cathy.

      If you really want to keep them, don't you want to put the "product review" tab before them? Or have you already tested and got positive results with this format?

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    • Profile picture of the author joshuagan80
      Originally Posted by Cathy Shelver View Post

      I must admit I do not like the 'privacy policy' and 'terms of Use' having their own menu Tabs.
      Thanks for all your feedback. I have made changes. How is it now?
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  • Profile picture of the author joshuagan80
    Thanks a lot guys. I'm sure i can learn a lot in this forum. I do hope if anyone of you has anything good to share, please tell me. I will update my progress here. My FREE traffic is increasing, and the Alexa rank is 872,218, my site is only 6 months old.

    Now I need to think of how to make good use of the FREE traffic to my site.
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  • Profile picture of the author mkpoway
    The grammar is poor and the content seems to be repackaged.
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    • Profile picture of the author mcmahanusa
      An attractive site, just needing a little tweaking. You might consider hiring an outside editor to groom your copy a bit. Occasionally the wording is awkward, and needs just a couple of changes to make it more enticing.

      I would suggest, if possible, to change your title from Get Girlfriend System to Get a Girlfriend System. It's better grammar.
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  • Profile picture of the author manwalksintoabar
    By any chance did you scale the header graphic horizontally to fit the width of the page? Their heads look too wide.

    You might want to relocate the search feature and move the whole thing up.

    Maybe put the Double Your Dating book where "Calling Her For the First Time" is with a double barrel headline.

    The wording of your heading is awkward and the grammar in your subheading is incorrect.

    "Helping You To Get Perfect Woman"

    mwiab
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    • Profile picture of the author joshuagan80
      Originally Posted by manwalksintoabar View Post

      By any chance did you scale the header graphic horizontally to fit the width of the page? Their heads look too wide.

      You might want to relocate the search feature and move the whole thing up.

      Maybe put the Double Your Dating book where "Calling Her For the First Time" is with a double barrel headline.

      The wording of your heading is awkward and the grammar in your subheading is incorrect.

      "Helping You To Get Perfect Woman"

      mwiab
      I have made the changes. What do you think now?
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