Need Opinion on this Clickbank Product Site Design

your links don't seem to be working for me...

Sorry bretski, try again maybe?

I can see how a certain personality of men would stumble across this late at night and purchase, its pretty compelling. I like the colors, fonts, and pics. as a consumer I judge and see that first, or I bounce.

I'm certainly no expert but in my opinon the right, bright yellow column is really distracting to the main copy.

The layout in the left column can be a little busy in some places, and you're right - if there was more content/detail provided on what exactly you're offering in terms of exercises/techniques instead of so many testimonials, I think that'd definitely help the site convert better.

Paul

HotDamnShortSales: yes, there is an untapped market in 40+ males as there is
natural replacements for viagra, etc. There is tons of traffic on his main
site for the enlargement guide but i am noticing from analytics the sales are
from the 40+ crowd.

Devid, thanks for the compliments. We have worked very hard on testing each
item. Will consider the font size, thanks.

Mirus, thanks, I may test the "in your face" element of the testimonials. The
guy has so many of them (unsolicited I may add) that if is just a super selling point.

The author has tons of content to make use of and is just a real honest guy in general so it makes it an easy sale.

Thanks for all the feedback so far.

Hi John,

It's not my niche at all (just wanted to get that out of the way first - no wisecracks, please). But I think it's really very good.

I don't agree with the comments above about the font-size and the yellow panels. They're absolutely fine.

The one thing I'd change (for two reasons: first it would stop me being an affiliate, and secondly I think it will reduce conversions) is the "ticking clock" for the bonuses. Here's the thing: many people don't buy at their first visit to a sales page. If people go back later, or the next day and see that again, it just makes you look dishonest. When I'm trying to sell something to someone, the last thing I want people thinking is that I'm dishonest. It's really offputting. Sorry to go on about it, but this is such a good sales page that, to me, it's a real shame to have something "shabby" like that on it, and I hope you'll test it and discover (as others have) that you sell more without it, by not p!$$ing anyone off, too.

Apologies for the strongly-worded negative point above. If I fancied the niche as an affiliate, it's a product that would potentially interest me, and I wish you really well with it.

Devid, will keep in mind for graphics.

Alexa: Thanks! I have already removed the timer. It was a recent test that transferred over from another product i had luck using it with. Thanks for all the other details.

i love the design and the sales letter. Good job