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Is this Sales Page Funnel Good Enough to Sell an Ebook at the End?

by GoogleWarrior
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ESL GAMES

I have been working on this for months and months. I have dedicated a long time in figuring out how to do the SEO, setting up the website, learning how to use the Adobe Creative Suite, etc.

This is the almost final Sales Page Funnel... I still need to make a few tweaks and add on the Autoresponder... but let me know how I could improve this before I add on the Ebook.

(and if you are wondering why I havent added the ebook - is because I haven't written it yet.)

And if you are new to IM I hope that you can see what a newbie is capable of doing!
#ebook #end #funnel #good #page #sales #sell
  • Profile picture of the author Bane
    oh my dear lordy,

    please for the love of gawsh (I'd say god, but that offends sensibilities sometimes) don't use auto-playing videos with music like that. A: I'd opened it in a tab to look at at a later time - B: My volume was on 100% - C: A lot of people would already be browsing to see if it's something they like first.
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  • Profile picture of the author jasonmorgan
    and if you are wondering why I havent added the ebook - is because I haven't written it yet
    Might want to work on your priorities.

    Your site, it's quite awful.

    Fake testimonial pic purchased on fiverr?
    Do you have permission to use that music?
    Poor grammar
    The layout has no flow, it's a jumbled mashup of text
    They copy was unconvincing.
    The site as a whole had no sense of professionalism

    I liked the "learn how I became a better teacher" pic collage.
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    I'm all about that bass.

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    • Profile picture of the author Bane
      Originally Posted by jasonmorgan View Post

      Might want to work on your priorities.

      Your site, it's quite awful.

      Fake testimonial pic purchased on fiverr?
      Do you have permission to use that music?
      Poor grammar
      The layout has no flow, it's a jumbled mashup of text
      They copy was unconvincing.
      The site as a whole had no sense of professionalism

      I liked the "learn how I became a better teacher" pic collage.
      You made it past the video?

      Hat's off to your Sir, for you are many miles more tolerant than I
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  • Profile picture of the author jasonmorgan
    and if you are wondering why I havent added the ebook - is because I haven't written it yet
    Might want to work on your priorities.

    Your site, it's quite awful.

    Fake testimonial pic purchased on fiverr?
    Do you have permission to use that music?
    Poor grammar
    The layout has no flow, it's a jumbled mashup of text
    They copy was unconvincing.
    The site as a whole had no sense of professionalism

    I liked the "learn how I became a better teacher" pic collage.
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    I'm all about that bass.

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